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Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909

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201 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 9:39 pm

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the thing i love about this story is;

it keeps me wondering whats gonna happen nexxt
& when i have the idea in my head zee goes and does some crazy shit! lol

202 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:50 pm

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lol
that's what i try to do

keep it unpredictable

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203 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:57 pm

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i lovve the suspense n here Twisted Evil

i think im ready for the next add lol


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204 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 11:13 am

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i'll probably add tomorrow if i'm up to it

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205 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 11:55 am

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Okay, long as it's SOON


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206 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:00 pm

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aww man that add should have been a wee bit longer lol
but i still loved it
bumpz


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207 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:35 pm

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Add thats all I ask... Smile


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208 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 5:57 pm

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i'll add in a minute


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209 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:22 pm

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Chapter F I V E

And when I'm gone
Just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
-Eminem


Quentin plopped carelessly down onto his cream sofa, staring at nothing in particular. His eyes burned horribly- the tears fighting so hard to stay in their cage. Twenty minutes prior, this would have been the last thing in his head when these uniform-clad men showed up to his abode. His first thought was that they were coming to arrest him for not paying a few tickets that he had received, but when her name slipped from their lips- Que knew then that some shit was bad.
“I’m sorry to inform you that your girlfriend, Lauren Mitchell’s is dead. We found her inside Club Toxic earlier this morning.” The Caucasian officer placed a picture on the coffee table that sat horizontally across from him. Quentin gasped at sight.
It was his girl, his life, his-everything.
She was sprawled on a bed with a man positioned under her. Quentin’s focus should have been on the grisly sight, but now all that registered was that she was fucking another dude while he was downstairs in the same club.
“Where were you last night Mr. Carter, if you don’t mind me asking?”
“I was there- at the Club.”
“You were there all night?”
“Yes.”
“With her?”
“No…she had um,” Que cleared his throat, “She told me that she would be right back. I thought she was headed to the bathroom, so I told her okay. Time flew by and she still wasn’t back and I was dancing with another girl a-”
“You didn’t think to go look for her?”
“No, she does shit like this every time we go out. I’ll leave and she usually comes home the next morning. I mean, I knew she was cheating, but I never brought it up.”
The Hispanic female officer wrote notes down on a miniature pamphlet as Quentin spoke.
“Do you know anyone who would’ve wanted your girlfriend dead?”
“No, not that I would know of. Everyone that she hung around seemed genuine. Um did you contact her father?”
“Yes we have.”
Que nodded and then shook his head. It was so unreal. He buried his face in his hands.
“We’ll keep in contact with you Mr. Carter.”
Que nodded but didn’t lift his head up; he was too distraught about the whole situation. Just a few hours ago Lauren was begging him to go to the club with her and now she was dead.
He had tried numerous times, racking his brain for some type of information, useless or not, as to who would kill Lauren. Granted she wasn’t the easiest to get along with, but her attitude was something that you could get around. People didn’t hate her; at least that’s what Quentin thought.
The house telephone rang, pulling Quentin away from his deep concentration. He glared at the caller ID before pressing down on the green icon, answering the phone call.
“Quentin sweetheart, is this you?” The elder lady on the other end of the phone spoke shakily. It was Lauren’s grandmother whom he was really close with. She had approved of Que when Lauren had introduced him to her family a few years back.
“Yes Ms. Rose, it’s me.” He paused to swallow the lump in his throat. “Are you okay?”
“I’m fine chile- sad, but fine. How are you holding up son?”
“I’m not sure. It…it just happened so suddenly ya’ know? I just hope that they find who did this.”
“I do too. Lord knows I do. Are you going to come help Greg with the funeral arrangements and such?”
Quentin cringed at the name. Everyone in Lauren’s family liked him except for ‘Greg’, her father. He hated Que with a passion and none could change his mind.
Que spoke truthfully, “I don’t know Ms. Rose.”
“I understand. You know you can still come see me sometime. Don’t be a stranger ya’ hear?”
“Yes ma’am. Take care of yourself.”

After wrapping up his telephone conversation, Que stood to his feet and sluggishly made his way to the bar that sat near his balcony’s sliding door. He spotted the deep purple velvet bag with gold accents and writing almost instantly. He snatched the bag open and pulled the brown liquor bottle, Crown Royal, from solitude and unscrewed the top. Quentin placed his lips to the opening and took one huge gulp, not worrying about grabbing a cup. The liquor burned down his throat and he hissed, but that didn’t stop him from downing the half empty bottle until it was none left.


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End of CHapter Five!

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210 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:29 pm

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i dont understand why he cares? lol jk but she did do him dirty. damn zee. this wreckles girl going around killing people. :/

211 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:34 pm

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Wellllllllll.

Lauren shouldn't have been messing with Zee's man and Que wouldn't be downing Crown Royal right now...


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212 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:35 pm

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New Page!!! Oh, yeah!


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213 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 11:14 pm

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Now he knows...
lol...He don't really
care...smh. But she
cheated, she deserved
it...


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214 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:32 am

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LMAO at ya'll

how does someone deserve to die?
how mean are ya'll lol

Mad

i'm disgusted with you ladies

lol!

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215 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:34 am

heatRAE!

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damn Que ASS IS A SOFT NIGGA DAMN SHE WAS CHEATIN N HE SITTN THERE CRYN scratch HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE

216 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:38 pm

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lol...so now you want to put
it on us cuz we said she deserved
it smh.
You wrote it...lmao
so she deserved it.


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217 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:05 pm

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Oh my my my
lol

Why is Que cryin...
But i understand him....If it was me and i just found out that my boyfriend was cheatin on me and just got killed...
I would have been upset but ya kno not to upset cause the nigga was cheatin
lol


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218 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:23 pm

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i`ve finally made it here. this is a good ass story. con-10-u it. Very Happy

219 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 10:32 pm

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Lol yeah i'ma put it on ya'll.

and ya'll need to leave Que alone
he can cry if he wants
that was his girl and he 'loved' her.

just so heartless Crying or Very sad

Rae, you're mad as hell huh lol

Michel`le glad you like
@ welcome to thee board


&& like i said on the PR board, i don't know when the next add is going to be

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220 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:57 am

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Bumpin my ish

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221 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:45 am

heatRAE!

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pig

222 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:45 am

heatRAE!

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What a Face ADD SOON

223 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:46 am

heatRAE!

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тяɘy и ∂яαkɘ ƒιɘи∂ wrote:Lol yeah i'ma put it on ya'll.

and ya'll need to leave Que alone
he can cry if he wants
that was his girl and he 'loved' her.

just so heartless Crying or Very sad

Rae, you're mad as hell huh lol

Michel`le glad you like
@ welcome to thee board


&& like i said on the PR board, i don't know when the next add is going to be






0YES IM MAD AS HELL HE IS SO STUPID IM REALLY DISSIPOINTED IN HIM RIGHT NOW Neutral No AND NOOOOOOO U GOTTA ADD MORE SOONNN

224 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:59 pm

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bumps and ups Exclamation


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225 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 7:27 pm

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`urps

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