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1 Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 12:56 pm

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Mission; Assassin: First of Trilogy
Assassination; Jul 8 09
Burial; Undecided


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P R O L O G U E
Flashback

Back in the day, when I was young- I’m not a kid anymore.
But some days I sit and wish I was a kid again
-Ahmad


Five-year old Zion Anderson let out a piercing cry as she sat inside of her pitch-black bedroom. Her back was against the two walls that joined together to form the corner. Her eyes were shut tightly, and to add more protection, were buried between her knees. Although her small hands covered her ears, young Zion could hear the argument that was occurring on the other side of her bedroom door. The loud cursing and occasional sounds of hits and glass breaking caused Zion to cry louder. The tears and cries weren’t because of the actual fighting, but because her head was booming- as if it was going to explode any minute. The bass in each of her parents’ voices vibrated into her eyes, numbing the aching that was going on inside her head.
Ever since she could remember, Zion’s parents had always had disagreements and altercations. While some parents tried to keep their children away from seeing them fight, Zion’s guardians didn’t give a fuck. Her father would bash her mother’s head in a quick second and could care less if their child was witnessing such.

And then it was silent. No more screams, no more broken items. Zion slowly removed her hands and opened her eyes, adjusting them to the darkness. She the crawled towards the door, making sure she didn’t interrupt the stillness of the house. Zion placed her caramel face flat down on the beige carpet and glanced under the crack the door had left. Staring her right back into her eyes was those of her mother. They were motionless and glazed over. A smile crept slowly onto the young girl’s lips as she stood to her feet and turned the knob on the door. There before her lay one of the two human beings that she despised so greatly, lying in a puddle of her own blood.
Zion stepped over the body, scooping up the knife that lay beside her in the process. She heard feet shuffling across the hall, indicating that her father was indeed, inside of his bedroom. Zion tip-toed towards the room and pushed the doors open silently. Her father’s back was turned towards her- it was the perfect chance. She charged as fast as her small body would take her and plunged the knife into his back. His body spun around towards his only child and groaned, reaching for her. Zion pulled the knife out and inserted in with more force to his chest- over and over again. The toddler didn’t stop stabbing until she felt as if it was enough. She stood over her father’s dead body as her heart raced.
The pounding in her head stopped instantly and it brought a devilish smile to her miniature lips. After a few minutes of staring, she ran to the telephone and picked it up from its cradle.

Zion dialed 911 into the phone and waited for someone to answer.
“911, what’s your emergency?”



Last edited by тяɘy и ∂яαkɘ ƒιɘи∂ on Thu Nov 19, 2009 4:34 pm; edited 13 times in total

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2 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 1:04 pm

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OMG Very Happy
This is so good.

I love the new spin starting at childhood
You so going to have to keep adding.
I didn't know what she was going to do at first
when she seen her mother.
That was so sad.

Keep doing your thing.

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3 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 1:51 pm

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Very Happy
Thank you
It took me a while to figure out what i wanted her reaction to be when she saw her because i wanted something a lil different

But i'm glad you like it
I'll add the first chapter today or tomorrow depending on how many comments i get

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4 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 1:53 pm

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Ok cool...
Becuz this story is already
has a good start.

I LOVE IT Smile

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5 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:09 pm

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6 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:30 pm

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Glad ya'll like it

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7 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:45 pm

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GUUD JOB GIRLIE!!!

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8 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:17 pm

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T H A N K



Y O U

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9 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:24 pm

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Upz Smile

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10 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 5:44 pm

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UPZ BREE!!!!!!!! LOL
I REALLY LIKE

11 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 8:38 pm

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really loves it!




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12 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Wed Jul 08, 2009 10:23 pm

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i'm so happy ya'll love it

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13 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:13 am

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P R E S E N T

Chapter O N E



Zion Amoretti wiped the blood off of her brass knuckles and tossed them over to her partner, who was also her twenty-one year old foster sister, Melissa. She tucked her gun back into the large duffle bag and after zipping it up; she tossed it of her shoulder. The body that lay in front of the two women was motionless in its own blood. Zion stood deep in thought for a moment, trying to decide what she wanted to do with the corpse. Tossing him into the lake would be too simples and plus that was getting quite old for the twenty year old. She wanted a change.
“Yo, you got my lighter on you?” she questioned her sister who immediately began digging through her beige cargo shorts. Seconds passed by before Melissa retrieved the item.
“Yeah.” Melissa tossed the lighter into the air and Zion caught it with her left hand as she poured lighter fluid onto the dead man’s body. Zion lit a cigarette that was found in the pocket of the man and flicked the cancer stick into the fluid, which instantly produced red and orange flames.

It took a whole twenty-five minutes until the fire died down. All that was left were ashes. Melissa knew that was her cue, so she began sweeping up the remains and dumping it into the plastic Ziploc bag. After all the miscellaneous items were placed back into the duffle bag, both females exited the home of Alexander Burt, Melissa’s ex boy friend, and climbed into the 2009 Black Escalade that was used for special occasions such as this one. Zion pushed the proper key into the ignition, shifted gears and sped off into the night. This was almost an everyday event unless the two sisters had other things to encounter. Melissa shifted in her seat as she pulled out an already rolled blunt. She stroked the lighter and lit the tip, watching the smoke escape. After taking her three hits, she extended her hand to her younger sister and Zion took the blunt without any hesitation.
“Do you feel like going to Tease tonight?”
Tease was like an upscale strip joint and nightclub that Zion’s foster parents, Melissa’s biological parents, owned. The Amoretti’s were a large Italian Family who majority of Atlanta, GA, so you know that they were shitting out Benjamin’s and wiping their rich asses with Jefferson’s.
Like every club that the Amoretti’s owned, Tease had a gigantic dance floor with marble tile. Two bars were located on each side of the dance floor and served every drink that you could possibly think of. Overlooking this from two-sided mirrors was the VIP area. Only those of importance were allowed access to VIP and if you were anything but, your ass would be back downstairs, or out the door.

“Yeah, I need a drink anyways.”
“Well don’t get too drunk because you are driving us.”
“Excuse you?” Zion asked as she snapped her head in Melissa’s direction.
“Bitch don’t look at me like that. My car is at your crib.”
“Well you better catch a cab because I’m getting fucked up tonight.”
“Whatever Zee, you heard what I said.”
Zion huffed in frustration and rolled her eyes. “Pass me a ‘rillo and some weed and shut up.”
“We ain’t even through with this one yet.”
“Just do it, damn.”

Zion brushed the marijuana seeds from her jeans as she pressed the lock button that was located on her key chain. She removed a piece of her hair that was out of place, flicking it back with the rest of her hair. She looked over at Melissa who was already marching towards some random female that she would be taking home with her- lesbian or not. Whatever the woman’s sexuality, Melissa was sure to turn them out- the shit never failed. Zee giggled at her sister and then proceeded towards the entrance of the nightclub, bypassing the line that wrapped around the building. Zion’s pumps clicked against the concrete while she received many stares- some good, some bad. She was clad in a pair of Levi Skinny Jeans, a Juicy Couture top, and on her feet were a pair of Christian Louboutin stilettos. Diamond hoops and four tennis bracelets adorned her wrists and ears, courtesy of Tiffany & Company. Females’ faces were twisted in disgust and jealousy as they stared and the woman before them. I mean, who wouldn’t?

After placing a kiss onto one of the Bouncer’s cheeks, Zion stepped into the club, the flashing lights smacking her dead in the face. She climbed the steps to VIP and spotted her brother’s Emanuel, who was referred to as Manny, and Dominick who they called Nick. Positioned on Manny’s lap was his wife Karen and a random stripper was entertaining Nick.
Zion greeted her brother’s and then the remaining two sisters who sat on next to their brothers at the VIP table. Donna and Cassidy waved as they both sipped on a bottle of Hypnotic. Zion ordered herself a bottle of Hennessy and a can of Coke and then took a seat at the table.
“Where is Melissa?”
“Downstairs fucking with them females.”
Nick laughed, “I swear I don’t know how she does it. All the females I don’ fucked with are ‘into bitches’ all because of Lissa’s ass.”
“She’s a player.” Bella added as she nodded her head towards the VIP door. Every turned their attention to the door and watched as Melissa walked in with her main girl on her arm, London.



*If I get more replies and comments, I'll finish chapter one for you!*

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14 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:27 am

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uhps!!! i like dis

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15 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:01 pm

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16 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:55 pm

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Gonna read after work

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17 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 12:57 pm

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NEW PAGE YES!!!!!!! lol!

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18 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:14 pm

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19 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:42 pm

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ROTFLMAO I JUST REALIZED MALISSA IS GAY when one of the brothers say she turning all the girls out ahahah., anywho i like this! cant wait to READ what happens next

20 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:12 pm

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21 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:44 pm

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22 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Fri Jul 10, 2009 1:55 pm

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lol

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23 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:53 pm

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24 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Jul 12, 2009 12:39 am

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ADDING TOMORROW



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25 Re: Assassin: First of Trilogy .+111909 on Sun Jul 12, 2009 8:11 pm

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