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51 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Mon Oct 19, 2009 1:04 pm

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Dang I just realized you added...Smh...
I am so loving this story...
Laython Laython Laython...
That man do not want Ashleigh.
She was wrong for cheating on him
in the get go...And dang they are roomies.
How is this gonna play out.

Upz add more ASAP


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52 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:27 pm

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53 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:01 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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NEW ADD
&+ M0RE LAytH0N
AR0UND 6 My tiME !
( MEMPHiS tiME PE0PLE ) !

tHANKS F0R tHA SUPP0Rt LADiES !

UPPZ !!

54 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Tue Oct 20, 2009 2:47 pm

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oooos snap MEMPHIS TEN REPRESENTING lol


What part do you stay in


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55 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 12:35 am

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We waiting on that add!!!
Soooon please!!!


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56 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:08 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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Chapter oo5




I woke up the next morning to the sun shining in my face. Today was going to be one hell of a day; my first day of classes. College, here I come. I wiped my eyes as I stretched, then I noticed Ashleigh was still asleep. Laython. Everything that I heard last night flooded my brain. Laython had me thinking that there was something between us, and he already had a girl. All niggas are the same.

I got out of bed and looked at the clock. It read 7:15; my first class was at 8 o`clock. I walked over to my closet to find something to wear. Today did not feel like a “get cute” type of day. I settled on a white and black striped wife beater, my black, short sleeved, zip up jacket that had “I`m a … SECRET !” spray painted on the back in white, and my black capri sweats. I threw on some deodorant, and handled my personal hygiene. After applying a little make-up, I was ready to go.

“Who you trying to get all cute for girl?” I heard Ashleigh`s half sleep voice ask me. I turned to look at her, and laughed.

“Nobody girl,” I replied. “This is not cute. This is comfortable; me on an everyday basis.”

She shook her head and smiled. “Well, I`m proud of you for having these early morning classes. I know I could not do this shit at all.” I laughed at her again. I apologized for waking her up. “Girl, it`s nothing. I`m gonna fall right back to sleep.” I smiled. I could actually grow to like this chick, but she had something that I wanted.

I looked at the clock again, and noticed that it was time for me to leave. I told Ashleigh good-bye, and went on my way. Once I was downstairs and outside, I stopped at the top of the stairs and looked at my surroundings. This is my life now. Time to be the woman that I know I am meant to be. I smiled. I was going to make it and I refused to let anyone get in the way of ruining my dreams.

Before heading to my Calculus II class, I decided to stop by Starbucks to get a Double Chocolaty Chip Frappachino. Once I entered the student center, I wish I hadn`t. Dammit man. There, sitting on a couch, was Laython. I tried to turn into Starbucks before he saw me, but it was too late. He caught my eye and smiled before standing up and walking my way. Here we go.




I was sitting on a couch in the student center since I had about 20 minutes until my Calc II class started. I was paying no attention to the world around me, and then she walked in. Beautiful. Arai`lea caught my eye, then quickly turned her head as I smiled. What was that about? I wondered as I got up and walked towards her.

Arai`lea turned and walked into Starbucks, and got in line. I walked up behind her and covered her eyes.

“Good morning, Beautiful,” I whispered in her ear. I felt her body tense up, so I moved my hands away. She turned and looked at me. The expression on her face had me worried, scared and nervous.

“Hey Laython,” she said in a cold tone before moving forward in the line. I followed behind her.

“Arai`lea, what`s wrong?” I asked. She shook her head and chuckled.

“I met my roommate last night. I learned a lot of things I didn`t know.” She stared at me like I had hurt her. What does her roommate have to do with me? I saw her stare behind me and smile. “There she is now.”

I turned around to see who she was talking about. I regretted it instantly. Oh hell; this cannot be happening. I looked back at Arai`lea with pleading eyes.

“Arai`lea, I don`t know what she told you but it was probably all lies.” I was trying to plead my case, but the devil reincarnate appeared too soon.

“Hey Arai`lea,” she spoke as she laid her hand on my chest. “I see you met Laython.” She had a big smile on her face. I pushed her hand off of me, and stepped away from her.

“Ashleigh, what are you doing?” I questioned her. I needed to get this straight now. Aria`lea had walked to the counter and ordered her drink, and I followed behind her, Ashleigh right on my ass.

Once I reached Arai`lea, I tried to grab for her hand, but she snatched it away, and Ashleigh pulled me back at the same time. I spun around and gave Ashleigh the death stare. Arai`lea had received her order, and walked back over to us.

“Baby, why are you acting like this?” Ashleigh whined, trying to stroke my arm. I shrugged her off of me again, and looked at Arai`lea.

“Rai, what did she tell you?” I asked as calmly as I could. I could see tears threatening to form in Arai`lea’s eyes. I would never forgive myself for this, even though it wasn`t my fault.

“I think you should just talk to your girl, and leave me alone.” Arai`lea wiped a tear that managed to escape, and walked away.

I looked at Ashleigh. “You told her I was your BOYFRIEND?!” I was trying not to get upset, but Ashleigh was pushing her envelope with me. “Why would you do some stupid shit like that, Ashleigh?” I was fuming.

Ashleigh looked at me upside my head. “Why does it matter what I tell her about you? You don`t even know the girl.” I laughed in her face.

“You remember the girl I was telling you about last night?” I wondered in a whisper. She slowly nodded her head. “That girl is Arai`lea.” I shook my head and scoffed at her before walking away.

I started heading to class knowing I had to find Arai`lea and talk to her soon.

God, please let her listen to me. I sighed. I didn`t want to lose my chance with her, but I was afraid I already had.



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i KN0W it t00K ME F0REVER t0 ADD
BUt i L0VE y`ALL F0R BEiNG PAtiENt WitH
ME ! i tRiED t0 MAKE it A G00D 0NE !

S0 WHAt D0 y0U tHiNK ??
C0MMENtS !
PREDiCti0NS !
ADVICE !

tHANK y`ALL S0 MUCH F0R tHA L0VE !!


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57 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:26 pm

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Dang...I know there
will be some drama in that
room.
SMH

and girl I seen a dude who
reminded me of Laython...smh
I wish I could have takin a picture
of his sexy self...lol...o well

Upz add soon


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58 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:35 pm

heatRAE!

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I BELEIVE THIS CALLS FOR A BUMP



ADD MORE SOON

DAMN ITS FINNA B TO MUCH DRAMA IN 'THAT' ROOM LOL



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59 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 2:40 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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RAE ...
iREP
tHA N0Rth !!

but i live in arlington
^^^^^
(don`t tell nobody )

60 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 4:06 pm

heatRAE!

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lol Ok I wont its our little secret lmao...

I stay in Bartlett...LAME

61 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:36 pm

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Great Add!!
Lea better listen to Laython
Or else ima cum in and steal him away!!
Add more soon!!!!!!!!!!


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62 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:38 pm

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I just keep giving u page after page!
I'm THAT gud!!


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63 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:52 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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tHANKS RAE ! i`M GLAD y0U
LiKED it ! &+ tHA 0NLy PERS0N tAKiNG
LAytH0N FR0M ARAi`LEA iS ME !
( L0L ) !

i`M t00 EXCitED AB0Ut
tHA NEXt FEW ADDS !

i H0PE y`ALL ARE t00 !
Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

UPPZ !!

64 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 12:02 pm

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Lol...Now you got me excited
I cannot wait til the adds
Upz

Laython...umm...chocolate...lol


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65 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 12:07 pm

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Yeah me is very very very excited!!!
Add soon!


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66 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:48 pm

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Im like so excited that excited a understatement lol


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67 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:00 pm

kaylee


I LOVE THE STORY. I JUST STARTED READING IT AND I DID NOT WANT TO STOP!
HOPE YOU ADD REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!Very Happy

68 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:35 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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i G0t A NEW READER !! yAy !!


i`m glad you are enjoying it !
i plan on adding tonite depending
on how this studying goes
&+ how long it takes !

leave me comments !

UPPZ !!

69 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:03 pm

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Sorry I've been away for so long
But I'm back.
Darling(Think I've watched too many old movies lately), we love laython and Rai need to came down and listen to watch her future husband is saying!
I like Ashleigh BUT, I think she has psycho-stalker potential.

70 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:28 pm

kaylee


WELL YOU BETTER GET TO STUDYING SO WE CAN GET ANOTHER ADD TONIGHT j/k LOL
REALLY HOPE YOU DO ADD SOON THOUGH!!!!!!

71 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:38 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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My L0NGESt ADD iS
C0MiNG iN A FEW MiNUtES !!

i`M S0 EXCitED !!

UPPZ &+ BUMPiESZ !!

72 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:53 pm

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Chapter oo6




I am so done with niggas. I was livid; hell, I was past that. Why couldn`t there just be one guy who would be real and straight up with a girl from the get go? I was walking to class, leaving Laython and Ashleigh in Starbucks doing or saying whatever the hell they wanted to.

I walked towards Lee, the building that housed a majority of the classes that I would be taking. Once I hit the stairs, I heard someone yelling behind me.

“Arai`lea!” It had only been a day, and I knew his voice already. I sighed and refused to look behind me, so I kept walking into the building. Dear Lord God, if you love me at all he will NOT be in my class. I sent up a silent prayer to God, hoping he would hear me. I found my class in the basement and took a seat. I was the only one there. I looked at my phone and realized it was only 7:50. I let out a sigh.

While I was pulling out my notebook, I heard the door open. I didn`t have to turn around to see who it was before I heard that voice again. It was just me and him now, alone in the room.

“Arai`lea.” It sounded as if Laython had almost whispered my name. I felt chills run down my spine. Damn that voice. I tried to ignore him, but that boy was persistent. I felt his presence next to me before I knew it.

“Arai`lea,” he whispered my name. I refused to turn my head and face him. I didn`t want him to see me cry. Unfortunately, Laython had other ideas. He placed his finger under my chin and turned my face to his. Our eyes met. He saw the tears and hurt in mine; I saw the sincerity and honesty in his.

“Yes, Laython?” my voice barely above a whisper. I always said that if anything happened between someone I knew, I needed both sides of the story, because for so long I was never able to tell mine. Laython wiped the tears off of my face, and placed both hands gently on my cheeks.

“There is nothing between Ashleigh and I anymore,” he told me. I closed my eyes and heard him sigh before he continued to talk. “She did me extremely wrong in high school; cheated on me with more than a nice amount of guys, tried to pin a pregnancy on me, then spread some of my very personal business around. I have nothing to do with her.”

I opened my eyes and looked up at him. There was this look in Laython`s eyes that I could not deny. There was no way he was lying to me; that look could not have any deceit or deception behind it.

“Arai`lea, I am diggin’ you, and I am not trying to mess that up, alright.” He smiled at me, and I couldn’t help but smile back. “Smile, Beautiful.” I felt my cheeks get hot, and I laughed.

“I`m sorry about what happened earlier, Laython,” I said. “She just talked about you like it was y`all were just having relationship problems and were struggling working them out. I should have talked to you first. Forgive me?” I put on my best smile, and Laython laughed a little.

“Always.” He kissed my forehead and sat back in the seat. I look around and noticed that people had begun filling in. I was so embarrassed.

Class eventually started, but it was the first day. I got a syllabus and we “got to know” one another. We only stayed about 30 minutes before we were dismissed. As I stood and prepared to leave, Laython grabbed my hand and we walked out together.

Once we hit outside, I was beyond all smiles. Laython. His name was just so damn sexy. Hell, I got turned on just thinking about his name. I laughed and he turned his head to look at me.

“What`s so funny, Beautiful?” he asked me.

“Nothing,” I said, the smile on my face able to be heard in my voice. We continued to walk, and as I looked around, I realized that we were headed towards the guys’ dorms. “Where are you taking me sir?” I questioned him. I know this nigga don`t think he finna smash? He laughed at the look on my face.

“I`m done `til tonight, so I wanted to go hang out in my room with you. If you don`t want to go let me know.” I looked at him for a second, then replied.

“It`s cool. Just don`t try nothing with me mister.” I laughed. “I don`t play them games.”

He laughed at me. “Babygirl, the only thing that is about to get beat is your ass in this Madden we finna go play.” I stopped dead in my tracks before laughing as hard as I possibly could.

“See, now we gonna have problems. I will whoop anybody’s ass in Madden.” I continued walking with him.

Laython smiled at me and squeezed my hand. “I guess we are going to have to see.”




I have to admit, this girl was more amazing than I thought she was. After playing 12 games of Madden, I had won 2. Yes, Arai`lea had kicked my ass. I looked at my clock and realized that it was 2:30; we had been together since 8. I had this feeling, and I didn`t know what it was, but I liked that Arai`lea made me feel it.

“So, you still think you beat my ass?” she asked as she laughed at me. Her smiled made me melt. There was something about his girl. I playfully pushed her.

“Okay, I`ll give it to you,” I said. You got extremely lucky today. I ain`t been able to play in a while.” She smiled at me and laughed more. “So you think you funny nigga? Alright then, we gonna see.”

I don`t even think she knew what hit her, but I ended up on top of her tickling her like there was no tomorrow. Arai`lea was screaming, laughing, and flailing around; I thought she was adorable.

“Laython, stop it!” she screamed. Arai`lea kept laughing and yelling. I was laughing, too. I was having too much fun with her. I loved it.

“Nah, you wanna laugh at me and stuff, so you suffer too.” I refused to stop tickling her. She was so damn sexy underneath me, laughing and smiling. It felt so right. It felt perfect.

But our perfect moment was interrupted by a knock at my door. I stopped tickling Arai`lea and turned my head towards the door. It was Ashleigh. I looked back at Arai`lea and sighed. She saw the look in my eyes and she knew. She mouthed that it was okay and gave me a faint smile. I climbed off of her and stood up, looking at Ashleigh.

“Well,” she said, “ain`t this some shit?” Ashleigh looked at Arai`lea, who had sat up on the edge of my bed. “Ho, I told you that Laython and I had some shit to work out and this is what happens. He is my man. He don`t want your over-sized ass. Back the fuck off.”

I was more than pissed. Ashleigh had went too damn far.

“You better watch what the fuck you say to her Ashleigh,” I said as calmly as my instincts would let me. I wanted to choke that girl so bad. “We are NOTHING! There is no us. Leave Arai`lea alone. Hell, leave me alone.” I was trying not to be rude; my mama taught me better than that.

Ashleigh scoffed at me. “So you really think you want that fat bitch?” She held this slick ass smirk on her face that was making me sick. Then, I heard Arai`lea stand up and walk up beside me.

“Ashleigh,” Arai`lea began to speak, “let me tell you a little something about Arai`lea. I have been through far too much to deal with you. You don`t know a damn thing about me little girl, so don`t open your mouth to shit. And, yes baby, I am a thick young lady. You better believe that it ain`t a damn thing to be ashamed of. So, let some more slick shit come out of your mouth about Arai`lea Kashore Weston; I`ll make sure you regret it on a regular basis.”

Arai`lea stood there with her hands on her hips. Damn, she looks so fucking sexy. I shook my head and smiled. Then I looked at Ashleigh, who had walked a little closer to Arai`lea.

“Are you really sure you wanna go there with me, Arai`lea?” Ashleigh asked her. I felt the hint of a threat in Ashleigh`s voice. Arai`lea smirked and chuckled.

“Ho, I been there. I waiting on you to decide what the fuck you wanna do.”

Ashleigh began to walk backwards out of my room. Once she was in the hall, she stopped and smiled.

“It`s war, ma`am.” With that last comment, she walked away.

I turned to look at Arai`lea, only to find her eyes locked onto mine. I smiled.

“Where did that girl come from?” I questioned her, with a look of satisfaction on my face. I love a woman that can handle her own. I was brought out of my thoughts by the beautiful laugh that made me melt.

“That young lady has always been around. I just keep her in her room until I need her.” She smiled up at me and I stepped closer to her. She bit her bottom lip and looked from underneath her eyes at me. She is turning me on. I cupped her hands in my face, and put my face so close to hers that I could feel her shallow breaths on my lips.

“Well, Miss Arai`lea, I think I like getting to know all these different sides of you.” I whispered low enough just for her to hear me. “What else can I learn about you?”

Arai`lea stared deep into my eyes before she spoke. “I guess you are gonna have to stick around and figure that out for yourself.” She smiled at me, biting her lip again. Arai`lea.

“Good thing I don`t plan on going anywhere.” Then, I leaned in and kissed her lips softly. Nothing over the top; just a soft, sweet, simple kiss. She pulled back and closed her eyes. Then she looked up at me and said one final thing.

“I wasn`t planning on letting you anyway.” Arai`lea pulled my head down to hers and we kissed again. This time the kiss went deeper. My tongue explored the depths of her sweet mouth. She tastes so good. Our tongues danced for a minute, until we both pulled away.
I looked at Arai`lea and we smiled at each other.

I am definitely not going anywhere, Beautiful.


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S0 WHAt D0 y`ALL tHiNK ?
C0MMENtS !!
PREDiCiti0NS !!
ADViCE !!

GiMME S0ME FEEDBACK PE0PLE !!
( L0L ) !

tHANKS F0R tHA SUPP0Rt LADiES !!


^^^^^
MUMBLE SAyS tHANKS t00 !!

UPPZ &+ BUMPiESZ !!



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73 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:21 pm

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DAMN...THAT ADD WAS AWESOME...

Laython know he want that thick bone.
Who Ashleigh think she is trynna
declare war. She not part of Congress
tell her to sit her chia looking ass
down...Add asap...

Loving it


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74 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Fri Oct 23, 2009 10:28 pm

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yAy !! i`M GLAD y0U LiKE
iT MAMA NAE !! ( lol ) !

BUMP it UP PPL !!

75 Re: --P0EtRy !! ( UPDATED ) -pg.12 ! on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:40 am

SexyT

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BANGING ADD!!!
GIVE US ANOTHER ONE
ENCORE UNE FOIS (that's french!)


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