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201 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:48 am

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hell to the em effin no !!
i`m about to get hella pissed !!
trevor is stupid as hell for not
sayoing shit when they were at
karma`s house , &+ we all know
damn well that tha baby keerah
carrying ain`t trevor`s !!

ugh , i`m bout ready to
kick everybody`s ass for being
so stupid in tha beginning !!

add soon ! i`m dying !

UPPZ !!

202 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:51 am

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babygirl.camero wrote:

hell to the em effin no !!
i`m about to get hella pissed !!
trevor is stupid as hell for not
sayoing shit when they were at
karma`s house , &+ we all know
damn well that tha baby keerah
carrying ain`t trevor`s !!

ugh , i`m bout ready to
kick everybody`s ass for being
so stupid in tha beginning !!

add soon ! i`m dying !

UPPZ !!

LMAO I have to agree


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203 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:54 am

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
thank you janae !
( lmao ) !

204 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:22 am

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She has 2 talk 2 him again and let him know about the baby
I hope she is gonna keep it
Cant wait 2 see what happens tho

205 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:37 am

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I'm feeling so good...
Cuz I just got a little something....
So I'ma give y'all half of the next add!!!
Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

bounce bounce bounce bounce bounce


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206 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:39 am

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WHAT DID YOU GET???


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207 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:40 am

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Well w/e u got u should get every day or every other day....prolly sex tho Very Happy

208 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:41 am

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LOL...I KNOW I WAS BEING SO NOSY...LMAO


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209 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:45 am

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Chapter 36An old verse


I'm already looking back
I'm already looking around
Where did we get off the track
What was it that brought us down
I'm already waking up
How I've been asleep too long
Losing you is hard enough
Not knowing anything was wrong
Changes come but where they go?
You'll never know
Just another day like any other
Nothing in the sky said run for cover
Just another reason never thought it would end this way
There was no parade
No lights flashing
No songs to sing along the way
There was no parade




Trevor left my house that day and tried calling me every day for a whole month. I never picked up the phone, Latifah did a couple of times but when I was near I sent him straight to voicemail. She told me she never showed him the picture. After a while he stopped calling. I guess he understood that I wanted him to be with Keerah and thier baby. My heart was shattered and it would never be repaired again. During his last call he told Latifah that Keerah had given birth to baby boy. Apparently he was happy now or he was trying to be because I was clearly avoiding him so he had no choice...they had fixed their problems. Guess I had just been the dumb hoe. They had moved because Trevor went to play with Orlando now...his contract with the Knicks had not been renewed after the season had ended and he was traded to Orlando Magic. I smiled when Latifah told me that he had said he wasn't giving up and one we wold be together. I only smiled because I knew it could never happen. Somehow something would get in the way. I don't think i was ever destined to be happy in love. But nevertheless, my love for that man will never die. It will burn forever in the shattered peices of my heart.

I was 5 months pregnant and my belly was huge. My students loved the pregnant me and always made sure I was comfortable in class. They behaved extremely well with me and I had no problems until the school holidays.

I stood in the snow rubbing my belly while my students ran out the school building laughing and singing Christmas songs. ‘Bye Ms Hill...see you in January!’
I waved good-bye at them as they got in the bus and went home.

‘It’s just me and you now my baby’ I was talking to my baby as I walked to the car. It was kicking a lot these days and Latifah said that’s what happens when you sleep with an NBA star. You get a very active baby. I decided to head over to the mall first so I could buy some Christmas presents for Latifah and her baby. She was due in January and she was getting very nervous. I had let her boyfriend move with us as they had worked out their issue and they were very happy together. It made me smile to see them happy. Plus he helped a lot around the house and was always around when I needed a helping hand.

‘Ok, baby, show mummy what you want’ I walked around the store looking and picking out baby clothes and shoes for my baby and Latifah’s baby. I hummed a Christmas tune in my head as I rubbed my belly. Some mothers were looking my way and smiling at me and I smiled back. Walking over to the baby furniture I looked at some cribs and dressing tables. I already had a room picked out but hadn’t got the furniture yet. ‘You like this sweety?’ talking to my baby made me feel good about being pregnant and I was eager to see him or her. ‘Mummy really wants to see you’

I wasn’t aware that I was being watched until I felt a hand on my shoulder making me jump. Turning around I saw Trevor with a baby carrier with his son in it.
‘Karma?’


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210 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:50 am

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Pleasure's wifey*peaches* wrote:Well w/e u got u should get every day or every other day....prolly sex tho Very Happy



You girls are so nosy!!!
But yeah...
My baby just laid it down
SOOOO GOOOOOOD!!!
He got me chirping.... (SORTA)


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211 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:55 am

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DANG YYYYYYY?????????

WHY THE SUSPENSE, MY HEART HURT
I WANNA KNOW WHAT THE DEAL IS
AND YEA I WAS BEING NOSY...LOL
LET HIM PUT IT ON YOU AGAIN
SO WE COULD GET ANOTHER ADD PLEASE


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212 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:56 am

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NEW PAGE=NEW ADD

LOL


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213 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:58 am

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LOL @ Janae!!
U crazy girl...
I'll add when i'm done reading my scene!!!
LOL....


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214 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:59 am

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Lol...Ok...Lemme wrap this up...lol


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215 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:02 am

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Lol...
YOUPPEEEEEE


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216 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:44 am

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Heres uz other haf Janae!!!!
Next up ->


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217 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:45 am

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Continuation of previous chapter

I smiled weakly and turned around again not being able to look at him. He placed the carrier down and wrapped his arms around my caressing my belly. I tried to remove his hands but he held on tight and had his head buried in my hair. After a while I felt something wet on my shoulders and I passed my fingers lightly on it. I realized Trevor was crying so I turned around and held his face in my hands.
‘I’m so sorry Karma...baby I am so sorry’
‘What’s wrong T?’ my heart hurt so much to see him like this
‘I left Keerah a few weeks after she told you to leave me alone. I don’t love her...I don’t think I ever did...I love you K...and I want to be with you and my baby’
I touched my belly wondering how he knew.
‘Latifah gave me the US picture that day but she told me to open it in December so I did. I kept it in my wallet all this time and this morning I opened it and got on a plane the moment I saw it’
‘But...I thought Keerah had moved with you...and your son?’
‘I took him and left her...I can’t be with her anymore...and even worse when I knew you were pregnant...some people had told me they saw you with a belly, but I wasn’t sure..part of me felt it though.’
I smiled up at him. I felt my baby moving like crazy. It knew it’s father ‘Well, now that you’re here let’s choose some furniture’
He seemed happy when I said that and immediately began picking out various items.
‘I don’t have that much money with me T...my other credit card is on my other purse’
‘I got all this baby’
We walked around the store hand in hand causing a lot of commotion as little kids ran up to him to ask for his autograph. He was sweet about it though and I took pictures for his little fans. We walked out the store and headed over to a cafe. Trevor carried his son as I noticed an old lady staring at me.
‘I know her...where have I seen her before?’
‘Go talk to her’

I walked over to the old lady and she smiled a toothless smile at me.
‘Arr, Karma my dear...you are back’
‘Urm...how do you know my name?’
‘Think my dear...years ago you found me in Miami’
‘Oh my God the fortune teller?’
She laughed and her whole body shook.
‘Yes my dear, it is me...I have been waiting for you. Dreams have been coming to me about you. Has he come back to you? Every time you cried, I felt it...and I decided I had to find you and make sure you are fine. The last dream I had, your lost love came back’
‘Trevor? He is here now...but I don’t know for how long’ I sat down and found myself telling her everything. She listened patiently and nodded as I talked.
‘I believe that now he is back for good...I believe that now both of you have learnt your lesson...Last night I had a dream and there was a man in the shadows singing a song. I wrote some lines down so that when I see you I can give it to you and maybe you’ll know what it means’
We continued to talk for over an hour. Afterwards she got up and walked away. Before doing so she took my hand and squeezed it.
‘Good luck Karma Hill’
When I opened my hands I saw a piece of paper...I opened it slowly and my eyes opened wide as I read its contents. She got all that down? How did she know? I was in total shock as I read the lines of the poem Trevor wrote for me back in high school.

Since the day that we met girl
I aint never had anyone make me feel this way
And my heart is sure it wants to be with you
Wanna give you the whole world
If you make the promise to me, You're gonna stay
Without you guiding me, I'm lost and so confused
What will it take to show you I'll be by your side
Girl I got you and I want to give you what you never had
Girl every day I hope to make you part of my life
Cause you know me and I know you
girl your love is where it's at
I'm gonna be the love that's gonna last
And be the one that got your back
Ain't nothing ever that bad that we won't be together
And though we both made our mistakes
And some we never wish we made
But we'll be okay if we just stay together


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218 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:46 am

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Lol
Every girl is happy after sum great sex

I got sum good sex the other day and cleaned up the whole house which i never ever do
my mom came in lookin like i was crazy

219 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:56 am

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Aww that is so sweet...They are together...
FINALLY...I love it I love it...

Thanks for da add...lol


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220 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:56 am

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Pleasure's wifey*peaches* wrote:Lol
Every girl is happy after sum great sex

I got sum good sex the other day and cleaned up the whole house which i never ever do
my mom came in lookin like i was crazy

Lol...All jokes to the side on that one


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221 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:03 pm

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i`m glad you got that good ,
so if you gettin tha pipe laid right
means we get more adds then
imma neede yo dude to be
sexin you up on tha regular !
( lol ) !

about tha story :
i`m not mad at everybody anymore .
trevor got his mind right
&+ so i love him again .
karma stayed strong throughout
tha whole situation . i admire
strong black women !

add more por favor !

UPPZ !!

222 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:52 pm

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Lol...
Glad u guys r happy now!!
Told u not to hate Karma straight away!!!
lol


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223 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:55 pm

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Chapter 37Not This Time



Karma was talking to the old lady and I sat down with my son and watched her. she was reading something on a piece of paper as she walked back to me.
‘Oh my God’
She sat down and told me about the old lady who was a fortune teller. I was just as surprised when she showed me the poem which was the one I wrote for her years ago.
‘How can she know that?’
‘I know...it’s strange’
‘You know what K...The last line is about us staying together and I think this is it. We’re gonna be together finally. You gotta believe that’
‘I don’t know Trevor...’
‘Ok...remember in high school I wanted to be with you so bad and when you gave in you said...’
‘Let’s take it real slow...yeah I remember’ she was smiling now
‘So let’s take it slow...very very slow’
She looked at me and laughed as her hands caressed my face. We were quiet until my son started making gurgling noises. ‘He is lovely...so cute’
‘Can you accept him?’
‘Off course...it’s your son and he needs to be around you and his baby sister or brother’
‘Thank you K...We can make it work this time can’t we?’
‘I hope so...I really hope so’



I was walking to the car with Trevor and I carried his son in my arms. His head rested on my shoulder and I held his little hands in mine feeling his fingers wrap tightly around my index finger.
‘I MUST DREAMING...This bitch ain’t holding my son’
We stopped when we saw Keerah standing next to my car with another girl.
‘Keerah you don’t have custody of Tajh...get lost..’
‘Give me my son NOW’
She began yelling at us and Trevor pulled me away towards his car.
‘We’ll come get yours later’
‘Bitch give me my son’ I felt something hit my back. It was an empty cola bottle. Two man appeared from nowhere and covered me as I ran to the car. She was throwing my things at me and I heard glass braking. When I got in the car I looked back and saw her and her friend breaking all the glass on my Aston Martin. Dad was going to flip. I told Trevor we need to go the police...
‘Ok...if that’ll make you feel better’
‘She might try to harm me or Tajh or our baby’
‘Ok...’ he looked over to me and smiled, ‘we’ll go’
‘Who were those men?’
‘Well...don’t get mad but when we separated the last time I hired two bodyguards for you because I thought Keerah would try and do something to you’
‘Wow...’
We drove the rest of the way in silence, the entire time I Tajh was on me my baby was kicking like crazy. If Tajh lay his head on the right my baby moved there and he lay his head on the left it also moved to the left. I smiled at them playing together. It made me happy to know that they are already getting along.

‘Here we are, let’s go’ we walked inside the police station and spoke to an officer who referred us to a detective.
‘How can I help you’
‘My ex attacked my girlfriend and I today in the mall’s parking. She was trying to take the baby but she has no custody. I have full custody of my son. She began throwing bottles at my girlfriend and broke her car’
‘Oh I got a call about 2 women breaking a car from the mall security...so it was yours?’
‘Yes it was mine, an Aston Martin’
‘Ok...fill out this form so we can a restraining order and the moment she breaks it, call me and she will be arrested’
‘But what about my car?’
‘Oh don’t worry, once you have filled out this form, we will have all the details we need to arrest her...the form is just for the restraining order because we don’t want her coming near you now, but she will be charged with breaking into your car’
‘Ok...good’

Trevor filled in the form as I sat with Tajh then we went home. I placed Tajh in his carrier and helped with the bags. Latifah must be out with her boyfriend as I didn’t see his car. A note on the refrigerator confirmed that they were out shopping.
‘It’s just the three of us for now’
I showed Trevor the room I had picked out for our baby. The furniture would be delivered tomorrow. We made plans on how we could fit Tajh in since they will be only a year between them. I really hoped that this time nothing can come between us again...all the broken promises we made in the past are over...I closed my eyes and prayed.


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224 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:14 pm

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I knew Keerah behind was coming back with her ugly self...
I wish she would try to pull something

Let me jump in then...Loving it...Add ASAP


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225 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:16 pm

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see , keerah gonna make me stomp
her no good , hatin ass in tha ground .
i swear i can`t stand hatin hoes !

but , i love trevor &+ karma &+ little tajh
( he is too cute sounding )

loving it , but i know
this ain`t tha end of that
bitch ! UPPZ !!

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