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126 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:07 pm

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RaeMoney09 wrote:ugh she just pissed me off soooo bad

TREVOR FOOL IF U STILL STUCK ON THAT GIRL U DUMB STUPID WORD UP...


MOVEEE ONNN

Lol...I know right. But They both there for a reason


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127 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:09 am

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Rae calm down...LOL
U crazy...
Don't hate her...she knows she messed up
But she just couldn't face it
So she ran from her problems
But now she gon have to face it...


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128 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:13 am

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Chapter 23Someday, Somehow



Seeing Karma with her new dude made me sick but it also made me sad. I pulled Janae to the side.
‘What’s going on?’
‘That’s Jermaine...you moved on T so she did too’
‘I moved on because she left me...I had no choice...she wouldn’t let me find her...she stopped loving me’
‘Stop it...she NEVER stopped loving you...if Rae was here she would kick your ass...Karma still loves you but she met someone who maybe can replace you and you can’t say nothing cuz it hadn’t been a month before you started fucking that stick insect there’
She was right and I couldn’t deny it. What would I have to do to get Karma back? College was going to be one hell of a ride. Keerah had gone off with her friends and I was left walking to the basketball gym on my own. I had to go find the coach so that I could introduce myself since I was here to play all above anything else.
‘Coach Jefferson?’
‘Yes?’
‘I’m Trevor Ariza’
‘Oh yes I remember seeing you play...welcome to UCLA, I’m sure you are aware that here we play hard and there is no room for losers. We want winners on this team’
‘Yes Sir’
‘Right, you must be here at the try-outs this afternoon at 3. Even though you already have your place I want to see you interacting with the others’
‘Ok coach...3pm then’

I turned and bumped straight into Karma. She was in gym shorts and a very small top. Her belly ring sparkled and I saw a tattoo on her belly that wasn’t there previously. We stared at each other for a while and she blushed.
‘Why you blushing? Ain’t like we never been like this before’
‘I know, it’s just...’
‘Just that we still both madly in love with each other....K I know you never fucked with that guy, I know you pushed him off you, and I’m sorry I never gave you the chance to explain yourself’
‘It’s all in the past...it’s ok now’
‘But...’
‘No buts Trevor...me and you were good, but we didn’t last very long’
She turned and walked towards the changing room and I followed her. When she realized I was right behind her she giggled and ran inside pressing the door so I wouldn’t come in but she knew I was too strong for her weak self and I walked in easily. She leaned against a wall and I admired her sexy body.
‘Stop staring like that’
‘Sorry’
I walked over to her and held her face in my hands.
‘Why didn’t we try again K? Why did you leave me like that? I need answers’
‘I was hurting Trevor, I didn’t want you to hurt too, I couldn’t bear to look at you and see hate cuz I know that’s how you would look at me had I stayed’
‘I would have found out the truth so that I could forgive you and then we’d still be together’
‘Really Trevor? Be realistic’
‘K you are still my whole LIFE, you are still my heart...I’m still in love with you’
I couldn’t help myself. I grabbed her face and kissed her lips. Damn I wanted her badly. Her body pressed against mine and her arms wrapped tightly around my neck. She moaned softly and I felt my dick rising. She felt it too because she chuckled a bit and softly bit my lips. We pulled apart and stared at each other.
‘I love you K...Remember that’
Then I walked out happy because she had kissed me back and I knew that somehow we’d be together soon. We had to be.


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129 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:49 am

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OMG

there is hope.
lol that is a great
add. i wonder how everything
is gonna turn out.


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130 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 1:45 pm

heatRAE!

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ummm DNT FALL FOR IT TREVOR DNT DO IT....

uppszzz add soon


lol ok ima stop being mean i gues but I STILL DNT LIK HER THAT MUCH AS LONG AS TREVOR HAPPY



n i hope he find out what she was doin so he dnt fuck up and catch something lol


uupppszz pig

131 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:02 pm

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Chapter 24Future Love


It´s so far away.
And baby you´re right next door.
Got me picturing your face again.
Something worth waiting for.
I put all others behind me.
They don´t live up.
I know what I want what I need to the T.

Baby if they ask me.
I would say I don´t even know your name.
And when they ask me:
Does it change?
No it don´t change a thing.
´cause it´s something about the way you love me.
There’s just something about the way you know me.
That I can´t explain enough
Just something about our future love future love future love.
Something about a future love future love future love


Trevor left my body weak and wanting him so bad. I realised I could never stop loving him but I had to. Jermaine was my man and I know that slowly the love gon come. I got dressed and walked to go meet Janae. Rae had arrived finally and we were gonna have a party tonight.

{That Night}

In the middle of the party, the lights suddenly blacked out and the music stopped. Everyone started groaning and mumbling. Then we heard someone laugh in the microphone. It was Jermaine.
‘Hey everyone, I’m glad to see y’all pissed right now...but me and my boys got a little something planned out’ Everyone started laughing and looking around for him but it was still dark.

‘I'll take the sun and have it placed on the band of a ring
and put it on your left hand
walk around with you, proud to tell the world I'm your man
shout it from every mountain, if you say I can’

He was singing the song he had sang to me this morning. The lights came on and there he was on stage with Kyle and Varren backing him up. Everybody started cheering as their voices resonated from the speakers.
‘This is for you baby K’
I felt myself blushing as people smiled at me and girls whispered ‘she’s so damn luck’. Janae and Rae were beaming at me. They had been in on this. I’d get them back later.
When the song was over he walked down to me and a sexy slow song began to play and we held each other tightly. I forgot about Trevor’s kiss as I looked in Jermaine’s brown eyes and smiled.
‘Thank you baby...that was beautiful’
‘I meant it, nothing is too much or too good for you’

Looking over his shoulder I saw Trevor staring at me. He had a smirk on his face and he blew me a kiss. I rolled my eyes and stuck out my tongue. We started making faces at each other until he laughed and waved goodbye.

My heart knew that Trevor was my future love but it also knew that right now it was with Jermaine and Trevor was out of the picture. I knew that there would be a whole lot of dram this year and I would have a lot of questions to answer but for now I tucked Trevor away in a little corner so that when the time came he could conquer my heart the way he did back in high school. And then there will be no more broken promises.


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132 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:15 pm

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omg...

so she wants him
to almost redo history.

interesting

lovin it!!!
add soon


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133 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:20 pm

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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!

ADD M0RE !!

L0VELy DAy iN tHA NEiGHB0RH00D !

MiSS KARMA NEED t0 G0NE
AHEAD &+ BREAK JERMAiNE 0R JERMy
0R WHAtEVER HiS UNIMP0RtANt
NAME iS HEARt &+ GEt it iN WitH tREV0R !

PLAyiNG GAMES AiN`t FUN !

UPPZ !!

134 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Mon Oct 26, 2009 9:30 pm

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babygirl.camero wrote:AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!

ADD M0RE !!

L0VELy DAy iN tHA NEiGHB0RH00D !

MiSS KARMA NEED t0 G0NE
AHEAD &+ BREAK JERMAiNE 0R JERMy
0R WHAtEVER HiS UNIMP0RtANt
NAME iS HEARt &+ GEt it iN WitH tREV0R !

PLAyiNG GAMES AiN`t FUN !

UPPZ !!

SO AGREES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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135 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:51 am

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LOL
U two r crazy...
In my next story Ima have all 3 of u...
Ima try n include ur personalities i see from ur posts
in it too...
SHould be cool


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136 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:55 am

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Chapter 25First Week Drama



What a week this has been...getting the syllabus for all my modules. My major was Geography and I was also doing Economics because my dad would be proud of me for that. I couldn’t wait for him and mum to come visit me. I hope that time I had spent away from them made them see they need each other and they belong together. I love my parents and I want them to be together.

‘Hi Karma’ I saw Keerah approaching me as I changed into shorts and a top for cheerleading practice. I smiled at her while tying my Adidas trainers.
‘I so wish I could be a cheerleader...I wanna cheer for Trevor’
‘Well why didn’t you try out?’
‘Cuz I can’t do all that you do!’
‘Oh, well cheer from the stands...nothing wrong with that...that’s where Eva Longoria cheers for Tony Parker!’
‘Guess you’re right. Anyway I’m off to watch him practice...you’ll be there right?’
‘Yeah cuz we practicing too’
She walked off and I just watched her. She had the man of my dreams...lucky bitch. I shook her and Trevor from my thoughts and walked out. I saw Jermaine and Trevor playing a one on one. They were good, Trevor was better but my man got mad skills too.

‘Karma hurry your ass up’ the girls were waiting for me.
‘Sorry, couldn’t help but have a peek’
‘You can peek later silly girl’
We started stretching amidst the wolf whistles we got as we bent down and did splits. Ignoring them we started practicing some routines which we were gonna do for the game in 2 weeks time. Out the corner of my eyes I noticed Trevor looking my way as they drank some water. I felt good and I know I looked good as I did my solo dance.
‘That was awesome Karma!’
‘Thanks guys but I think I can do better’
‘Yeah? Practice some more on your own and you can show us on Friday’
‘Sure good idea...leave the tape with me. I’m gonna stay for another hour’
‘Wasn’t 2 enough?’
‘Funny...nah something is missing and I need to figure it out’
‘Cool, have fun, we out then’
The girls walked off and I continued practicing until Keerah came up to me.
‘Can you show me some moves? Maybe I can try out some day’
‘You serious?’
‘Yes’
‘Ok, let’s do it then’
‘Now?’
‘Sorry, forgot you ain’t dressed right...urm...meet me tomorrow at 2 here’
‘Yay!! So happy...See you then’

I sat down in the locker room as I removed my clothes staying in only my panties. What the fuck is wrong with me? How can I teach Keerah how to dance? She was my enemy right now...Oh well guess I’ll have to talk to Janae and Rae and we can talk it out. I heard the door opened and grabbed a towel to cover my breasts.
‘I know what they look like’
‘Man you got a nasty habit of coming in the wrong locker room...out before Keerah see you’
‘She’s gone already. Telling everybody you gon teach her how to dance’
‘Yeah so?’
‘Why you doing that?’ he was standing in front of me by now and he grabbed the towel to reveal my rounded twins. I watched him sit down and face me making me think of that time in high school.
‘We can do it again if you want?’ he had smirk on his face and I resisted a giggle.
‘What you talk about?’
‘Let me refresh your memory if you don’t remember’
I was about to pull away but he was too quick. I found myself in his arms and his lips were on my mine as we kissed passionately and my hands began touch the body it had been longing for; Only a week of school and the drama starting already. Soft moans escaped from my lips as his hands felt my wet panties. ‘Trevor...’
‘Want me to stop baby?’
‘Na uh..’ I was trying to say yes but no came out as he pulled my panties to the side and inserted 2 fingers inside me.
‘I want you too badly K’
‘Take me Trevor...before I change my mind’
He stripped out of his clothes and I saw his enlarged penis. It definitely got bigger. He laughed seeing me stare at it. ‘It only gets like this around you’ I took it in my hands and played with it enjoying the feeling.

After a few strokes her lowered himself on me and we kissed like we used to. Our bodies became one even before he entered me. We made love there and then. It was beautiful. It was also wrong and I said so when we were done.
‘Why you gotta be like that?’
‘Cuz it’s true...we breaking promises to two people who love us a lot’
‘But we love each other’

He was right, ‘but we can’t Trevor...we need to sort ourselves out right before that happens’
My phone rang. Mum and Dad were here. We were going for dinner and I was late.
‘Gotta go, mum and dad waiting for me’ he pulled me into another sweet kiss before letting me go breathless and weak.



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137 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:56 am

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A nice long add
For a nice new page!!
lol! geek geek


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138 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:05 am

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karma is dumb ! straight up .
how she gonna teach tha girl who has
HER MAN
how to dance and shit ?! then , they gonna
get all cool ,&+ become friends &+ i
will never see karma ariza again .
stupid girl . then , she got tha nerve to
fuck that dude &+ everything , and still
tryna force herself to believe that she
" love " jeremih or jermaine or
whatever his name is ! she betta get right
before i take that boy ; with his sexy self !

anywho , amazing add ma`am !
can`t wait for the next one !

UPPZ !!

139 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:04 am

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Karma is trying to move on u guys...
So she tryna do things to get her to forget Trevor...
But u know it's hard to forget ur first especially
When it was a great first one
geek


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140 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:13 am

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That add was hot...
Wow so she befriends
the chick and is gonna teach
her how to dance and everything...
Plus made Love to her "REAL LOVE"
and is regretting it...Hmm...
Sounds like she is in denial to me...lol

Upz...Loving it Add Soon


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141 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:59 pm

heatRAE!

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ughhhh she is literally killing me hell...SHE LEFT HIM NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND ...she sOOOOO STUPID AS HELL

SORT NUN SHE NEEDA FUCKIN GET WIT THE PRGRAM LIK YESTERDAY TIME

UPPPSZZZ GREAT ADD LOL

142 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:27 am

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I'm loving ur comments!!!
lol! lol!
New ADD NEXT


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143 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:31 am

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Chapter 26Spring Break



Christmas came and went. Winter was now over and it was Spring Break. Everyone was talking parties. Karma and I had made love 2 more times since that time the first week of school. She always said we shouldn’t and then she gave up. I had a strong hold on her and she was always weak around me. The same can be said for me. But every time I saw her with her man I wanted to kill the guy. All we did was have sex but he was the one holding her all the time, he was the one who could kiss her anywhere and he was the one holding her hands as they walked to his car. They were heading away together for Spring Break and I was with Keerah.

‘Hey baby’
‘You ready?’
‘Yeah let’s go’

She got in the car and we drove off. A group of us were heading to the beach for the entire week. We planned to sleep on the beach as well so we had our tents and everything. I wonder where Karma was going and what she was going to do.

‘You ok?
‘Yeah why?’
‘You seem distant...’
‘Oh I’m just thinking...got a few more games left before NBA scouts come and look at me play hopefully’
‘Don’t worry you will do great’
‘Yeah...and your dancing getting better’
‘Really? Yay!! Karma is the greatest dancer I know in the school...she should be majoring in that instead of boring Geography’
‘Yeah well, she wanna be a teacher after’
‘I know...she’ll be a good one I think...she is very patient’

Talking about Karma was driving me crazy. For a week I wouldn’t see her and I began to miss her a lot. Keerah reached for my hands and she began sucking my fingers one by one. Karma was slowly pushed out of my head. I smiled feeling her hands at my crotch unzipping my jeans and pulling my dick out. She gave me a blow job as I drove trying very hard to concentrate on the road. She was chuckling as I came and she licked my dick clean.

‘What now baby?’ I looked over to her and she was laughing. She pulled up her dress to show me she had nothing on. My dick got hard quickly and she made her way on top of me. ‘Keerah I’m driving’
‘Better concentrate on the road then’
She lowered herself on my dick and started riding my real good. ‘Shit baby...’
‘You like it?’
‘Yeah...’ her breasts bounced in front of me but I had to look at the road occasionally giving one a lick.
She was riding me hard and moaning out loud turning me one. After a few miles of driving she came all over me and I came inside of her too. Giggling she climbed off and sat down in her seat leaving me wanted more.
‘Wait till we get to the beach’



I was off with Jermaine for Spring Break. He took me to a posh hotel so we could spend some time alone. I signed up for a massage while he slept a bit after the long drive. As the lady rubbed my back thoughts of Trevor flooded my mind and I wondered what he was doing. 3 times we made love since we started college. I missed her so much. The masseuse stared rubbing my temples removing Trevor from my mind. I sighed realizing it would be long time before Trevor and I could be together.

After my massage I went up to the room to see a dinner table with candles lit and a Turquise green dress laid out on the bed and a box with black Jimmy Choos. A note read ‘Get some rest and then be ready by 7pm. You’ll need all the rest baby, because tonight don’t end till I say so’
I smiled as I placed the dress on a hanger and lay on the bed for at least 5 hours of sleep. My body felt relaxed and Jermaine was all I thought about as I closed my eyes anticipating tonight.



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144 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:08 am

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Hey...so y'all still asleep??? Sleep Sleep Sleep
Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
I'm home from work and suffering from 'the mail'...
As my mum likes to say...'The Russian Boat has arrived'
Anyway enjoy the add...I don't think I can give another add later
I'm trying to rest...
It hurts soooooooooo much.... pale pale pale
Sad Sad


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145 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:00 am

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awww...i just sent my mail off lol



upppszz


thaT WAS GREAT ...



AND TREVOR N HIS GIRL SUM SERIOUS...ALL IN THE CAR DRIVING AND SEXING LOL

146 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Wed Oct 28, 2009 7:08 am

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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dude , karma &+ trevor need
to stop playing with these other fools
they with . i`m so tired of seeing
" trevor and keerah "
AND
"karma &+ jermaine "
they need to just face tha fact that
they need each other .

loving tha sex in tha car though .
that was some AMAZiNG shit .
but trevor came inside her . that chick
better not turn up pregnant .

great add ma`am !

( i just sent off my mail too =] ) !

UPPZ !!

147 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Wed Oct 28, 2009 8:14 am

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Wow so its like that...Well damn...
I have a friend who made a song called
Sex in the car...It went like this...

Sex up in the car baby...
We could make it last all night...

Just a small sample...

Anyway. Im sad...They belong together
and they both know it. The distraction needs to be
removed. I know Jermaine may be a nice
person and Keerah a nice person, so they
need to end up sleeping together and
Trevor & Karma could laug and realize it was fate

Awesome add by the way...Upz


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148 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:04 am

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Chapter 27Lost Love



‘Hey Rae...how was Spring Break?’
‘Oh so good...I found me a nigger so fine’
‘Typical’
We gossiped until Janae came I told them what Jermaine did for me every night.
‘So you got like 5 new dresses?’
I beamed at them and their mouths dropped open. ‘You lucky bitch!!’
‘I know. It was beautiful and so romantic’
‘Well I happy you had so much fun’
‘I’ll see you guys after class...I’m late and Ms Jill gon kill me’

The day went by and I didn’t see Trevor at all. He wasn’t even at practice. Maybe tomorrow. I walked back to my dorm with Jermaine holding hands. When we reached my door we kissed and he held my face close to his.
‘I love you so much baby girl’
‘I love you too Jermaine...’
He pulled something out of his pockets. It was a small box.
‘I need you to be mine...only mine Karma...I can’t let another guy have you...’
‘I’m already yours J’
‘Than wear this ring...think of as a commitment ring...’
He slipped it on my finger and I smiled. It was a beautiful ring and he had engraved our names in it.
‘It’s lovely J...’
‘Nothing is too beautiful for you...it looks pale compared to you’
‘Silly boy!’
I kissed his lips strongly before we pulled apart and said good-night to each other. I floated to my bed while Janae stared at me like I was crazy and I fell asleep straight away. It was finally time I moved on. I don’t want to break Jeremih’s heart the way I broke Trevors’ so I need to choose and Trevor made his choice months back and now I have to leave him with her. I can’t keep doing this to him. It’s time I stop it once and for all.



I had car troubles and missed the first day of school. The first thing I did was go tell the coach and he was alright with it but I had double hours of training tomorrow to make up for it. I didn’t mind though. I wanted to go see Karma but it was too late. I guess I’d have to wait for tomorrow.

{A week later}

I can’t believe Karma avoided me for a whole week. Where the hell was she? Why ain’t she answering my texts? I walked over to her dorm and knocked on her door. She opened it and smiled when she saw me.
‘Hey you what’s up?’
‘Where you been? I been trying to call you and you don’t pick up the phone’
‘I’m busy Trevor! I had tests coming up and I’ve been in the library a lot doing research and studying a lot’
‘Oh’
‘Yeah...Oh’ she was mocking as she moved to the side and let me in.
‘Look I need to talk to you now that you’re here’
‘About what?’
‘Trevor, I’m committed to Jermaine...me and you can’t happen anymore...I won’t hurt him’
As she said the words I felt my life slowly dying. She wasn’t kidding and she looked me dead in the eyes.
‘Why?’
‘Just because...you have Keerah and I have Jermaine...let’s try and be happy for each other’
‘Wow...you serious about all this’
‘Dead right she is man’
I turned around and saw Jermaine staring at me angrily. ‘You need to leave my girl the fuck alone...don’t you get it...she’s with me now...you should have listened to her back in high school, then maybe she’d be yours today’
I looked back at Karma. She was fighting back tears and only I could tell because I know her too well. She didn’t want this, but why didn’t she say so?
‘I told Jermaine everything and now we’ve committed to each other...you should do the same to Keerah’
I stared in disbelieve. Her eyes were begging me not to fight for her like I wanted to. ‘Fine...whatever makes you happy’ I walked out and brushed against Jermaine knocking him slightly off balance. I didn’t look back...I just walked back to my dorm. How could see do this? I thought me and her had something special and we could revive it somehow. That night for the first time as a man no longer a boy, I cried in my pillow, I cried for love, for a love that was now lost to me.


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149 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:20 am

heatRAE!

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thats was great...


GLAD he finally moving on monving on lol

I really dnt like jermaine though he SUPER GAY


and KEERah i guess she cool...


And i found me a "Nigga" lol


Add more soon

and I know u fina make trevor and karma work which is not cool BUT hey lol lol!


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150 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:02 am

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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just so you now know
i HAtE karma .
i`m just saying . that lil girl
keep playing games with peoples hearts .
trevor never did her wrong .
it`s karma`s damn fault he felt
tha need to tRy &+ move on .
stupid little girl . UGH !

anyway , good add . can`t wait for more .
i`m still mad as HELL though .

UPPZ !!

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