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Broken Promises {+2/12/09}

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101 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:26 pm

heatRAE!

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HA she stupid I hope he do break up with her hell....


ugh hate females who do shit like that lol jk


upppszzz add soon

102 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:06 pm

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Glad y'all liking it...
Rae don't hate her just yet!!
She gon need u!!
Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad


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103 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:11 pm

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Chapter 18Running Away



While eating my dinner I heard my phone ringing. I hoped it wasn’t Jeremih tripping again. I read the message and dropped on the chair with all my weight. How did he find out? What else does he know?

Why you asking?
Cuz he was texting you saying he wanna talk about what happened earlier today


I couldn’t reply. I ran to my room and changed into my juicy couture sweat pants and a matching hoodie. After changing I ran outside. It was dark outside and I ran as fast as I could not caring where I was going. Tears were falling down my face and I could barely see where I was going. Eventually I bumped into someone and I fell flat on my ass. I felt hands pull me up and I was crying so hard I just muttered thanks and prepared to take off again.
‘Hold up Karma?’
I froze in my tracks at the sound of Jeremih’s voice
‘What are you doing here?’
He pulled me in his arms and held me tightly. I couldn’t even pull away. I just began to cry in his arms and my whole body shook.
‘It’s ok Karma, I got you now...when I heard the sound of your voice I decided to come over and see you’
I couldn’t reply. I just continued to cry.

‘This is it than Karma?’
I turned around and saw Trevor in a black jacket with his hands in his pockets.
‘Trevor...No...It’s not like that’ I ran to him but he backed away.
‘Don’t come near me...stay where you at...he got you all good now’
‘No Trevor...I was running and crying and couldn’t see where I was...i bumped into him and he caught me’
‘I know how that nigger is...it’s Jeremih’
I looked at them. Jeremih nodded at Trevor and smirked.
‘Trevor please...don’t do this’
‘You give it to him to? Was it a lie that you told me...was I really your first?’
‘No...I wasn’t lying...you were my first and you’re the only one who has been there’
‘I’m done K...leave me alone...I’m out’
He started to walk away and that’s when I turned around and faced Jeremih. I began to punch him and hit him with all my force. Trevor ran back and pulled me off him because I had managed to knock him down and I was kicking him too much.
‘Stop it Karma’
I shrugged Trevor off and I ran away. Trevor called after me but I didn’t stop, my legs wouldn’t stop.
I ran back to my house with one intention on my mind. To run away again.


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104 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Fri Oct 23, 2009 11:43 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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ADD M0RE LiKE N0W !!
tHANKS MA`AM !!

AWES0ME ADD !!
iMMA PUNCH JEREMiH iN
tHA FACE !

PUNK ASS BitCH !!

UPPZ !!

105 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:57 am

SexyT

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Ima add just for you K because u gave us a really loooong and banging add!!!


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106 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:00 am

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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yay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im excited !!!

thank you !!

me luv u !!

107 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:01 am

SexyT

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Chapter 19Start Anew



I ran up to my room and worked fast picking up some clothes and shoes. I grabbed my money and the credit card my dad gave me when I started my senior year. When I was done I grabbed the car keys of my mum’s ride and left. I drove away from my house, past my school and away from my neighbourhood. When I reached the main highway I drove towards an exit. I didn’t know where I was going. As long as I got far from where I was. My life was over; my mum and dad were done and my boyfriend hated me. I have nowhere I belong.

I drove until the next morning where I stopped at a restaurant and ordered some scrambled eggs and orange juice for breakfast. My phone rang and I ignored it my mum’s call. Then my dad called and I ignore it too. Eventually Trevor called and I answered.

‘Where are you?’
‘I don’t know’
‘Don’t play games K’
‘I’m not lying...I just drove until I saw a restaurant where I could eat some breakfast’
‘Where?’
‘It’s not important, move on with your life...I’m sorry I hurt you...but I swear, nothing happened’
I hung up before he could reply with tears in my eyes.
My phone rang again and I read the message.
Come back K...We can work it out...If I knew you would react like this I wouldn’t have ended it...we can work it out and make it work
No Trevor, you’ll never forgive me...I love you though and I hope you’re happy
Come on K...I love you too baby...come back to me


I texted my mum and said I’m fine and just need some time alone then I switched off my phone and paid the bill. Climbing back in the car I started to drive again to an unknown destination.

What was my life going to be like now? What am I going to do with my life? How will I make it?




Last edited by LonelyAngel on Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:53 am; edited 1 time in total


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108 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:02 am

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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&+ i G0t y0U A
NEW PAGE !!!
UGGHHHHH ( i`m still doin this ) !!!!!!!!!!!!
i`M t00 G00D t0NitE !!
yAy ME !!

109 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:04 am

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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new page = new add !!

&+ this one does not count
`cause this was my " i love you "
kamaria add !! too good !! trevor
is beyond perfect !!
( ain`t got nthn on my
LAytH0N though ) !!

UPPZ !!

110 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:08 am

SexyT

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NEW PAGE = NEW ADD

Thanks 4 d new page K!!!

I know the add is short,
But I need to keep y'all guessing
what's gonna happen next!!
The next one should be longer!!


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111 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:09 am

SexyT

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babygirl.camero wrote:
new page = new add !!

&+ this one does not count
`cause this was my " i love you "
kamaria add !! too good !! trevor
is beyond perfect !!
( ain`t got nthn on my
LAytH0N though ) !!

UPPZ !!

Your crazy!!! Well, ur new add will be up later!
I've already typed it up...
I'll post it later...
AFTER YOU'VE ADDED SOMETHING GOOD TO POETRY!!!
Razz Razz Razz Razz


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112 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:21 am

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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yes ma`am !

but uhmmm , i need you
to go comment on my story
please !! ME LUVA YOU !

113 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:13 am

SexyT

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Yeah I just did!!
I had been busy for a while!!
Ima give u anothe longer review in a few minutes tho!!
Cuz I gotta finish cleaning the house


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114 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 10:50 am

SexyT

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Chapter 20A Glance at my Past


{2 months later}

If you ever see her
If you ever meet her
If you ever get a chance to sit down, talk to her
Then tell her it's so cold
It's so cold, it's so cold
Here without her
And tell her I miss her
Tell her I need her
Tell her I want her
I really want her to come back home, back to keep me warm
Tell her I'm sorry, I'm really sorry
Can you forgive me?
Please forgive me
And come back home, keep me safe and warm


It had been 2 month since Karma had run away, if that’s what you call it because she called her home every day. But she never called me. She claimed that she had got a job at a restaurant during the day and she went for evening classes. Her dad was upset but she said she needed her space so they gave that to her on the condition that she kept in touch and they could visit her every week-end. Her dad and mum even got back together hoping that she would come back, but it didn’t work. Eventually I realized she ran away from me because of all the pain she was feeling after what she had done.

I found out for sure that she had never slept with Jeremih. When I confronted him he laughed and didn’t even care that she had gone and said that she’d probably be back by Christmas. Christmas was 2 months away and I couldn’t live like that. I needed to know where she was and what she was doing, but my mind was preoccupied with basketball. Scouts had come to the school and were interested in me. I had a chance to obtain a basketball scholarship to UCLA and I was working very hard.

Karma’s dad told her about me and she only said she was happy for me. When he asked her to call me she refused. She felt that she had broken a promise to me, one that she had also made me make and she didn’t want to face me right now. But what I wouldn’t give to hold her in my arms.

‘Hey baby’
I turned around and saw my current girlfriend walking towards me. She was a beauty, but she was nothing next to the real love of my life, Karma. Nevertheless I bent down to kiss her and feel her melt in my arms. She moaned softly as my hands grabbed her butt and she giggled.
‘You’re crazy’
‘Only about you baby’
We walked away from school hand in hand. I was loyal to her physically, but in my mind I thought only about Karma. She was the girl I wanted...but would I ever have her.



I sat in the car and watched as Trevor kissed some girl. Tears fell down my cheeks and I realized that he had moved on and he was happy.
‘KARMA!!’
I turned around stupidly and saw Janae, Rae, Keish and Sha run towards me. I couldn’t drive off because they ran damn fast and reached the car quickly. I looked back at Trevor and he was looking at me. ‘Get in the damn car quickly’ I yelled at them. Once they were in I sped off not wanting to face Trevor who was yelling for me to stop.

‘What the fuck girl?’
‘Where the hell are you?’
‘San Francisco’
‘WHAT?’
‘Look guys I’m sorry I ran away, but my heart is just torn up right now and I need to heal myself’
‘Yeah by smoking and drinking’
They found the cigarettes and empty beer cans in the backseat. I explained to them what I was doing and I told them I was doing fine. We talked a lot and avoided Trevor until Rae started.
‘Trevor missing your dumb ass’
‘Yeah well it didn’t look like that to me’
‘Keerah? That just a dumb bitch he need to fuck so he don’t die thinking about you...and that’s a quote from the man himself. He said he had to find away to forget you and that pussy worked’
‘Well, look I gotta go. I got a long drive ahead of me’

We hugged and kissed good-bye. They forced me to give them my number and I laughed as I wrote it down. ‘I love you guys’
‘We love you too...your ass better call if you need us’
‘Yeah Janae...and same applies to you’

I watched them as they walk away. I missed them, but I had to forget my past and move on. I can’t do that here. I dug into my pockets and pulled out a paper. Trevor’s poem to me...I read it everyday missing him immensely. Turning the volume on the music up Mariah Carey’s ‘Angels Cry’ blasted loudly and I broke down. I had to pull over to stop crying and I began to scream loudly.

‘YOU STUPID BITCH...how could you ruin your life for a jerk who wanted some ass’ I was yelling at myself and I pulled out a blade which was all too familiar to me and I began to cut my arm. As the blood gushed from the various wounds I stopped crying and felt relieved. I started driving again, all the way back to San Francisco.


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115 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:20 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Love the add
He knows he messed up now
But she'll be back 4 him

116 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:41 pm

SexyT

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Hey thanx!!
A new reader!!
Youpee!!


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117 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:42 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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KARMA NEED t0 QUit &+
REALiZE tHAt it WAS SHE ,
N0t tREV0R ,
tHAt CAUSED HiM t0
FiND AN0tHER WAy t0
KEEP FR0M HURtiNG .

i tRy t0 tELL tHESE LittLE
CHiCKEN HEADS tHAt
JUMPiNG t0 C0NCLUSi0NS
WiLL GEt y0U N0WHERE BUt tHEy
NEVER SEEM t0 LiStEN !

G00D ADD MAMASZ !!
CAN`t WAit tiL tHA NEXt !!

UPPZ &+ BUMPiESZ !!

118 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:08 pm

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Well DAMN I missed a lot
so they broke up...

Sad

she ran away??? Evil or Very Mad

Plus he has a new girl??? affraid

All becuz of JEREMIH...

DAMN Good adds...add asap


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119 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sat Oct 24, 2009 4:33 pm

heatRAE!

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she so....ughh i hate how she acting like she the one hurt when in reality its him who she hurt...


she just pisses me off and NO i am not gone
feel badd for her lol jk


AWWW she needa quit that lil job n go bac home pig

120 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:57 am

SexyT

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Chapter 21Don’t Change



I arrived in San Francisco tired from the long drive. Walking to my place was a pain because I had been sitting down for so long, so I stopped to stretch my legs.
‘Hey Sexy’
I stood up smiling and turned around.
‘Hey you’
A guy stood admiring my body and licking his lips. ‘You free tonight?’
‘For you baby? Always’
He walked towards me and carried me to my door. I took my keys out and opened the door. We had barely closed the door when we started tearing each other’s clothes off. I pushed him against the door and started massaging his already hard dick. Lowering my body down I left a trail of kisses until my lips reached his dick which I started to kiss slowly. I licked around his head slowly hearing him grunt. Then I took him in whole and moved my lips up and down until he came in mouth. I spit it out on my panties and he carried me to the couch.
‘Spread them for me baby’ he was rubbing his dick as I spread my legs open and began to play with my clit. He lowered himself to me and buried his head in between my legs. I felt his tongue licking my clit and his fingers were inside of me rubbing against my walls.
‘Oh baby, Shit...’
‘Come for me Karma, come on baby’
I thrusted my pussy to his mouth and he gently bit my clit. I came immediately screaming out his name. Smiling he came up to me and slowly entered my wet entrance. We literally fucked each other’s brains out and came numerous times.

‘Here you go baby, ima see you in 2 days right?’
‘Yeah’
We kissed goodbye and I walked him to the door. Then I walked back and counted my money. Yeah this was what I was doing now...I prayed to God my parents wouldn’t find out. I only needed enough money for college and I was almost there. Guys loved a tight pussy.



I picked up my phone and dialled Karma’s number. Rae had called me up and given me the number.
‘Hello?’
‘Karma? It’s me Trevor’
‘Oh..hi...’
‘Karma come back to me baby...please’
‘I can’t Trevor...not now anyway...my life is messed up and I just can’t be there with you right now’
‘Why? Don’t you love me?’
‘I saw you with your girl...you looked happy’
‘I’m not...you’re all I think about...I need you badly baby’
‘I gotta go Trevor...and yes I still love you...so fucking much’
She hung up before I could answer. I wanted to cry, but she had said she still loves me and that gave me some hope that she would be back. In the mean time I got to play ball like crazy. Tomorrow is D Day and I need to play hard

{A week later}

I made it...The scouts contacted me again and I was in...They were granting me a scholarship to attend UCLA and play ball...I knew my NBA dream was just a few games away. Why ain’t Karma here with me? I need to share my joy with her...I wanted to make love to her tonight...not Keerah. Even as I pumped in and out of her I imagined it was Karma. My life was changing but I didn’t want it to change without Karma.


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121 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:11 am

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OMG karma
did it have to get this far
u have a nigga who loves u...
and Trevor is still awesome...

Upz add asap


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122 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 1:07 pm

heatRAE!

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heck naw karma uh un i can never lik u again no matter how of a dramatic change u take......

thts lik reall really low

trevor need to move on
im sure its another girl out there that will sweep him off his feet
cuz ol girl fucked up pig




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123 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:51 pm

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Chapter 22Nothing

{A year later}



My days of walking the streets are on hold for now as I start college. Today was my first day and I was excited.
‘Karma?’
I turned around and saw Janae. ‘Girl watup?’
We hugged each other tightly.
‘I been missing you so damn much...you looking good girlfriend...I was hoping to see you..Too bad Keish and Sha went to New York...why??’
We laughed as we explored the grounds of UCLA. I noticed a lot of guys staring at us. We were dressed decently though compared to other girls. I wore a black mini skirt and a pink blouse and Janae also had on a sexy mini skirt and green top.
‘Sup ma?’
We laughed at the ones who tried to talk to us but we didn’t stop and talk.
‘Karma’ hearing that voice stopped me in my tracks. I looked at Janae and she shrugged. Trevor’s voice still had the same effect on me. I turned around and stared into his brown eyes. The same browns that I found love in and then messed it all up. I smiled weakly.
‘Baby, there you are!’
I looked at his girlfriend walk up to him and kissed him on the cheek. She gave me a deathly stare and I rolled my eyes.
‘Hi Trevor, nice to see you after so long...how are you?’
‘I could have been better’ he was sending me a message that his girlfriend wouldn’t understand and I laughed.
‘Yeah well, I’m sorry that you’re not happy at the moment, but I’m sure it will all work out...I wish so with all my heart’ I saw his eyes shine for a second before her grabbed his girlfriend and introduced us. He didn’t say I was his ex. I shook her hand and smiled brightly before a guy called out my name and I excused myself.
‘Hey baby’
Another reason I stopped working the streets is that I met a boy and we hooked up. We had been together for at least 6 months. ‘Hey you’ Trevor was watching me closely, if looks could kill, my man would be dead for sure. I smiled at him and kissed my boyfriend as usual I had to force Trevor’s face out my head when I was with Jermaine.
‘You ready for your first day?’
‘Yep, are you gonna try out for the Basketball Team?’
‘You know I am baby’
‘Good I’m trying for Cheerleader so I can cheer for you’
He pulled me close and kissed my lips. It was the first time he kissed me like this and I felt my heart flutter. It was a beautiful kiss. When we pulled apart I searched his face to see where that came from.
‘You know I’m in love with you Karma Hill?’
‘Really?’
‘Word baby’
I kissed him passionately. This time with everything I had, I put it all in this kiss. I had to move off Trevor. All these months have passed by I still haven’t be able to stop thinking about him, but from today Jermaine was my future. I forced my heart to believe that because I knew that life was going to be really hard with Trevor on the same campus as me. As Jermaine held me close he started singing in my ears.

I'll take the sun and have it placed on the band of a ring
and put it on your left hand
walk around with you, proud to tell the world I'm your man
shout it from every mountain, if you say I can
girl, what you want?
if i got anything to say about it
that's what you get
girl, what you need?
don't ever hesitate to tell me so
baby girl, you're supposed to know
that nothing is ever too much
you want the world,
but to me, it's not even enough
i would give you the heavens in exchange for your love
baby, just know that nothing is ever too much for you girl
nothing is ever too much for you, girl


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124 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:59 pm

heatRAE!

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ugh she just pissed me off soooo bad

TREVOR FOOL IF U STILL STUCK ON THAT GIRL U DUMB STUPID WORD UP...


MOVEEE ONNN

125 Re: Broken Promises {+2/12/09} on Sun Oct 25, 2009 9:06 pm

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Well Damn...
What in the World
is going to happen with
everybody...I'm happy I'm
on campus to see whats all gonna
play out. Damn Im excited to see if the
heart of two loves will become whole again
once Karma get her act together and they both
drop the two...Or will they get back together...Upz....


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