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Shattered

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226 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 29, 2009 11:05 pm

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OMG...THAT WAS SO FRIQQIN GOOD
INDIGO IS HILARIOUS. I LIKE THE WAY
SHE PULLED THAT ONE OFF HAHAHAHA
MARCUS MARCUS MARCUS...WHAT CAN I SAY
ON THAT ONE...LOL LET HIM WATCH HER TAKE A
SHOWER. FOR WHAT? SO HE COULD TAKE A COLD
SHOWER AFTER HER...LOL ADD MORE...


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227 Re: Shattered on Wed Dec 30, 2009 6:44 am

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Sexy add!!!
Loved it...
Marcus is such a trip...lol
Clever tho... Laughing


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228 Re: Shattered on Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:30 am

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Okay, that add has happened to my cousin manyyyyy times. She never learns, so when she finally does get caught, I'm gonna laugh.

229 Re: Shattered on Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:15 pm

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Well, damn! Your cousin slick ass hell! silent

230 Re: Shattered on Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:00 pm

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Wow...i guess it pays to have a private bathroom...lol


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231 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:05 am

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Indigo Nicole

I see you all are enjoying Marcus and I's story. Hell, I'm enjoying telling it. I wish things had always stayed this way. Nice, and loving....Happy. I guess they're right, fame changes people. Sometimes for the better, and in Marc's case, sometimes for the worse. He stays out in Miami now, he's working on his fifth album. He's engaged. I saw a reporter mention my name and one of his kids names. His response: "Who?" I was such an important part of his life once, but now I'm reduced to "Who?" It doesn't seem fair. I gotta go now, my daughters calling me to watch "Pleasure P", her favorite singer. If only she knew he was so much more than that to her.

Marcus Ramone

I know who is she is. I just couldn't answer the question. My wifey Fanci would have down my back, demanding to see a picture, talk to her on the phone and all of that. I miss Indi...my....what did I call her? My....Querida. Yeah, that's it. I wish we could still talk, she sent me a picture five years ago of her and her daughter. She named her Mariah. I sent her check, she sent it back. Mariah passed along her message, "I don't want your money, Marc. Pleasure P, whoever you are now. I want...wanted you, but I guess I can't have you." She was right, it wouldn't have been fair to her when I knew I wasn't going to be faithful. I knew I wouldn't have time for her. And what was I to do? Sacrifice my career for her? We had went through this already when I was just getting my big break, I didn't want to break her heart again. Three strikes your out, right? She gave me more than three strikes. She put up with two girls being pregnant while we were engaged, me talking down to her, comparing her to the models that wanted me. She broke down one day. Simply laid down in bed and cried her heart out. I tried to comfort her but she started hitting me, telling me she hated me. Hated everything about me. Hated how selfish I was. Hated how I made her fall in love with me. Hated how I treated her. Plain, hated me. That broke my heart. The punches didn't faze me, but hearing the one you love more than life itself say, they hate you. That hurt worse than any other pain I had ever felt.

232 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 31, 2009 10:08 am

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Okay if ya'll dont understand the two POVs above, then I am here! At the very first paragraph of this story, Indi introduces herself and she's talking from a future standpoint, and then she starts talking about how it all started. The POVs about are talking from a future standpoint also, hopefully you can tell but if you couldn't that's your swift explaination!

233 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 31, 2009 11:40 pm

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Dang...no no no...Of course good things
would come to an end...Need more Sad


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234 Re: Shattered on Fri Jan 01, 2010 12:48 am

kaylee


it has to get better!!!!!they will be back together......wont they?
more please......have to know what is going to happen

235 Re: Shattered on Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:15 pm

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more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i loved it. i dont remember the part where she says speaks from the future.
but other than that please add. im dying and i need this!!!

236 Re: Shattered on Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:13 pm

Mykel.


I absolutely looove this story
add soon..very soon

237 Re: Shattered on Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:11 pm

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I'm not sure if I wanna do this story anymore....As of now it's on hiatus, until I'm passionate about it again.


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238 Re: Shattered on Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:16 pm

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I am sad, but I feel you on it.


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239 Re: Shattered on Sat Jan 16, 2010 7:30 pm

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whhy don't i see an add!!!! ???? ugh

240 Re: Shattered on Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:23 pm

TheBee

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please add... you can do it?

241 Re: Shattered on Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:53 pm

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I think I'm gonna revamp this story. Instead of continuing it as is, I wanna rewrite it and add more concepts to it. I want it to be reorganized, and so on...


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242 Re: Shattered on Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:47 pm

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Ok...As long as you continue to work on it
because its one of my favorites...


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243 Re: Shattered on Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:32 pm

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please do. because ,to be honest, this is one of the only stories that i gett on this site for...!

244 Re: Shattered on Thu Mar 25, 2010 5:18 pm

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Go to sneak peak the prolouge of the **SHATTEREDREVAMP** is there! It's coming as soon as I write five chapters ahead people...and this time there's a twist!


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245 Re: Shattered on Thu Mar 25, 2010 5:23 pm

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R U SERIOUS... I SO CANNOT WAIT

ADD ADD ADD ADD ADD PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!


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246 Re: Shattered on Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:55 am

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i dnt see it!!! omg

247 Re: Shattered on Wed Apr 21, 2010 10:06 pm

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AND THIS ONE


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