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Shattered

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201 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:00 pm

TheBee

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add more add more... and the text is way small!

202 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:11 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


They are 2 cute together...
But sex is an no right now

203 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:39 pm

pureSEDUCTION

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I'm about to make it bigger for you

And yes, sex is a bit much....but, there's nothing like a lil taste

204 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:49 pm

golden07

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Yes, but that taste needs to come
soon...I wanna read more Smile

hehehehehe


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205 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 8:37 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Oh i agree
A little taste is never bad
She may want a lil more after tho
Add more

206 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:22 pm

SexyT

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Ooh...
She gon want more fo sho!!!!
Add soon...
It was short but good and sweet and cute and....yeah a whole other list of words coming up!!!
Lol

Add soon!!


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207 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:09 pm

○→Єmιℓιε←○

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lol!

Add

208 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 01, 2009 4:32 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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so , those little short
" tease kamaria and drive her insane "
adds are not gonna cut
it ( lol ) so i need you to add
a nice

L00000000000000000000NNNNNNGGGG
add . thank you ma`am .

UPPZ !!



Last edited by BEAUtiFUL[nightmare] on Thu Dec 03, 2009 5:53 am; edited 1 time in total

209 Re: Shattered on Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:05 pm

TheBee

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HURRY UP AND ADD!!! OMG PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

210 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 10, 2009 1:38 pm

Mizz_Choclate-Kiss

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OH SHYT........SHYT BOI.......(SINGING)MARCUS FINNA TAKE HER DOWN, REALY BOUT 2 TAKE HER DOWN...YEA

211 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:37 pm

pureSEDUCTION

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School is kicking my butt right now. But ummm, I promise the next time it will be longer, just cause KAMARIA called me out.

Oh and I'm visiting Memphis weekend and the lady who's over the group goes, "Now, Memphis is a very crime ridden place, stay in lighted areas, please don't stray away from the group because if you get lost I am NOT coming to find you."

212 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:13 pm

kaylee


cant wait for the add.
lol when i went memphis i call a snowbunny the whole time

213 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:07 pm

heatRAE!

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well dang..


I DIDNT KNOW WE WAS THAT BAD THAT PEOPLE TALK ABOUT US BEING LIK THAT lol



GOSSHH lol


MEMPHIS AINT THAT BAD....WELL I MEAN WE DO HAVE CRIME BUT ITS SLOWLY DECREASING lol

214 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:47 pm

pureSEDUCTION

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In a figurative way, we live right down the road from memphis. I go there about eight times a year. It could be my second home, and I ain't NEVER had a bad experience...then again, I stay away from certain places that we shall not name.

215 Re: Shattered on Fri Dec 11, 2009 10:56 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Still waitin 4 an add

216 Re: Shattered on Sat Dec 12, 2009 10:47 am

pureSEDUCTION

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Expect one earlier this week and then a longer one early next week. And I guarantee ya'll are going be ROLLIN reading the next add.

217 Re: Shattered on Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:55 pm

SweetGin1028

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hey, great add im loving the story

I hope Marcus can learn to control his hormones from these other females before he wind up hurting Indigo. Peer Pressure can be your down fall at all cost.

218 Re: Shattered on Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:51 pm

TheBee

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please add!!!!!!!!!!!

219 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:03 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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i guess i am still gonna sit
here and continue waiting
on you to add some more
..............................
yeah , i am getting pretty impatient .
( lol ) loved tha add mamasz !
can`t wait for tha next one .

UPPZ !!

220 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:14 pm

pureSEDUCTION

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Kae, the end of 15 is already done...I was just gonna wait until I had all of 16 done to give yall something long...So what ya'll want me to do???

221 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:42 pm

BEAUtiFUL[nightmare]

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i guess i can wait til you finish .
i need to go into unexepected forum rehab .
( lol )

UPPZ !!

222 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:42 pm

pureSEDUCTION

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LOL! I'm sure we can find you some treatment.

223 Re: Shattered on Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:23 am

TheBee

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give us a small add to read so we have a clue on what is going on.

224 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 22, 2009 4:01 pm

TheBee

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addddd please lol

225 Re: Shattered on Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:26 pm

pureSEDUCTION

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Chapter Fifteen cont.
 
Marcus Ramone

I followed Indigo to her room, which was cute. It was blue and brown, and it had a nice vibe to it. I knew Indi wasn’t ready for sex and I wasn’t going to pressure her. It’s just every time we talk it goes back to China and Jaz. "Marcus, I understand if you don’t want me. That’s fine, I accepted that long ago." This is my way of proving to her that I do want her. She situated herself on the bed and followed her lead.

"Marcus," She stared at me and grabbed my hand as she sat up on the bed, "My dad is coming home any minute and I don’t want him to catch us like this." I completely understood, I didn’t want her crazy ass dad to catch us like this either. I bent down to give her quick kiss but as I started to pull away she pulled me back to her.

She smiled afterward, "That’s how good you made me feel tonight. I love you."

"Love you too, Querida."

I stood there for a minute, mostly cause I didn’t want to leave. Indigo made everything
better for me. "You know, it’s probably best if I go." She nodded and pushed a piece of
hair behind her ear. "You gone be okay?" I asked, stalling.

"Yes," She smiled and lit up the room. "I’ll probably take another shower-"

"Don’t tell me that, I’ll mess around and stay." She giggled and adjusted on the bed.

"Bye, Marcus." She hinted and started walking to the shower when I heard a door open. We locked eyes panicking. Oh hell, why me? I didn’t want to die today.

"Querida hurry up and turn on the shower."

"What?!"

"Indigo," Her dad called. I rushed her into the bathroom with me following behind her.

She walked to the tub and started the water.

"Marcus." She said in regular voice before I stopped her.

"Indigo, he’s gonna come up here. Now turn on the shower and I’m getting in there too."

Her eyes got wide and reached for the knob to start it.

"Are you trying-"

"Indigo!" He shouted. I immediately, with my clothes on jumped in the shower. I forgot she didn’t have time to adjust the water because it was freezing cold. I shivered.
I heard his footsteps and I grabbed Indigo, "Indi, take off your clothes, get your body wet in the shower, and put on a towel. Then answer the door, NOW!" I demanded quietly as she quickly stripped and put on a shower cap. I tried my best not to look but I couldn’t help myself. Querida was beautiful. She got in the shower twirled twice and jumped out just as her dad knocked on the door. I pulled the shower curtain back so you couldn’t see me. I was sure I was sweating in the cold water. I should have left when she told me but I couldn’t, I wanted to be with her.

"Hi, daddy!" I heard her say excitedly.

"Everything okay in there?" I know I wasn’t the best Christian in the world but I was praying to GOD I didn’t get caught. I heard her pretend giggle.

"I didn’t know bathrooms were hazardous, daddy." She offered quickly, I felt and shared the nervousness. I heard her dad’s footsteps walking away. Then I heard hers.

She snatched the shower curtain back with a scowl, one hand held her towel up. Not being able to resist myself I grabbed her and kissed her. "You know when you did your little naked twirl?" I broke the kiss and whispered close to her ear, letting my lips brush her ear. She shivered in my arms as she nodded. I stepped out of her shower, while still holding her waist. "You got my mind spinning and I need to get out of here before you loose your v-card babe." I said before kissing her again.

She pulled away this time, "Actually you gotta stay until everyone goes to sleep. And I don’t know HOW you gonna get out my driveway without SOMEONE hearing you leave." She said as I stopped stroking her hair.

"Are you serious?"

"Yes, Marcus."

"Shit." I cursed under my breath. "….I’m going to stay until your dad is in a deep sleep." She looked at me like I had two heads but what other option did we have? None. "…And since we in here, we might as well take a shower together."

"What are you gonna put on after you get out the shower?" She asked, shooting her eyebrow up. I cracked a broad smile.

"Or I could watch you take one."

"I think not, boy, you out your head tonight."

"I can help too." I suggested. She shook her head no and I stared at her for a second before pulling her to me again. "Your absolutely beautiful, Indigo Nicole. Your gonna be my wife one day." She blushed and looked down and I lifted her head up and kissed her.

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