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Shattered

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176 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 29, 2009 6:58 pm

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The chapter I got is a teaser. Like a real teaser. Nothing interesting happens but it's a happy one~!
Do you guys think I'm pacing this story too slow? Trying to find a good pace for this story is hard because they're are so many elements. Just as a heads up this is going to be a long story, There is so much I want to cover in this story and it's taking a while for me to get into it. There is a slew of interesting chapters coming up in....I'm not sure.

----Lisa loves you guys!

177 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:23 pm

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That is so awesome...
I am so happy it is going
to be a long story...
I LOVE IT

AND A TEASER...OMG
I cannot wait...

Upz...


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178 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:34 pm

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Chapter Fourteen.
Indigo Nicole.



Marcus to me to the park….again. I never got tired of being there with him. We were hand in hand until we got to the swings. I sat down in one and he pushed me.

"She got those eyes, those eyes, that’ll see right through you. When she leaves then I, I wanna leave with her too. And she’s on my mind like all, all the time. When we touch I go weak and I can hardly speak. And I hope that she thinks about me cause I’m always thinking of her. I just wanna hold her hand, be her man, I wanna know if she’ll take a chance…"

A car passed by playing the sweetest song I had heard. "Marcus, do you know that song?" He said no and I shook my head in disappointment, "Dang. I like it. Now, push me higher." "I demanded.

He laughed, "I’ll push you off!"

"No you won’t."
I giggled with him as he started to push my harder.

"Try me."

"You push me off and I promise you I’ll never talk to you again."
He slowed down his pace.

"Don’t threaten me with that." He said sternly. I dug my feet down in the ground and stopped the swing. I turned to face him.

"Why not?"



He just started at me for a minute and then he touched my cheek with his hand. The look on his face was…I don’t know. "Querida, I wouldn’t make it if you stopped talking to me."


He bent down and gave me a quick peck and that was it. It didn’t take a mind-blowing passionate kiss to make me realize it. It was in a swift peck and the expression on his face after it. I was in love. I got out the swing and came around to him and just hugged him. I hugged him like I hadn’t seen him in years. It wasn’t a tight suffocating hug though, it was more of a soft ‘I-need-you-in-my-life ‘hug.



"I love you."



The words came out of our mouths at the same time. I glanced up at him and could only think, "This is what it’s like to love." I held Marcus close to me, hoping the hug talked for me. He squeezed me back and smiled. I saw the words Mrs. Marcus Ramone Cooper in my head.




Marcus Ramone Cooper



Pierre’s call ruined the moment. Apparently someone noticed I had been slacking off with dealing. I didn’t want that to be my identity anymore. I didn’t want to be your run-of-the-mill drug dealer, and I didn’t want my baby to be the run-of-mill drug dealer’s wife. I don’t want ya’ll to read that kind of story(
). "Hello," I said, hoping my tone was mad and aggressive.


"Yo’ B, calm down. I’m passing on a message here. They noticing the slips in sales, man. You gotta get back out here and sell."


"I can’t do that."
I answered simply. I knew it was dangerous, and I knew some bad would come from it but they got ten thousand little runners that could take my spot and would be happy to do it. I just would have keep out of their way and make sure Indigo kept out anyway. I hung up and Indigo pecked my lips. I smiled down at her and we sat in silence for a moment.


"Now are you glad you gave me a chance, Babe?"
I asked her and smiled harder.


She giggled, "Yes….I guess. Me and Riah still aren’t as close. I barely even speak to her since I got with you. I lost Jaz as a friend but I guess she wasn’t one to begin with. Although, I have gotten close to Nique." That was news to me. They never even mentioned each other. "I guess what I’m trying to say is that although I’ve gained a wonderful boyfriend I lost a lot too." I nodded, understanding what she was saying me and P only talked about business lately, I needed to get that on track.


"Oh and don’t forget your in trouble."
She grinned. I looked back at her and asked what my punishment was. She leaned in and gave me a passionate kiss.


"You can’t your lips can’t touch my lips anymore until tomorrow at lunch."


"Did you have to punish me that much?"
She nodded and pushed her long hair back. She started walking away from me and did a twirl. She blew me a kiss at the end of it. I laughed and nodded. "I got you Indigo." We wound up chasing each other around the park and I kissed her before we got in my car. I wish things had always stayed that simple.

179 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:35 pm

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I've already got the next chapter halfway written. Sorry about the add I above I had writers block going on and there's still a little bit there. Bare with me.

180 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:51 pm

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TAT WAS AWESOME..


DAMN IM HAPPY THINGS GOING GOOD RIGHT NOW....


AND I JUST KNO SOMEBDY FINA COME FUCK IT UP.




UPPPSZZZ


ADD MORE




GLLADD YOU BACK LISA LISA pig

181 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 29, 2009 9:07 pm

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AWESOME...

I love it...It was so sweet
and yet such a turn on.
I hope nothing too bad
happens...

Ha...That is a laugh though huh...


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182 Re: Shattered on Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:39 am

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Great Add lisa
We need more now...
Don't leave us hanging for weeks again!!!
PRETTY PLEASE!!!


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Love Mist

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Last Call

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Underneath the Make-Up
Dark Secret

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183 Re: Shattered on Sat Oct 31, 2009 8:47 am

kaylee


ADD SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

184 Re: Shattered on Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:05 am

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LonelyAngel wrote:Great Add lisa
We need more now...
Don't leave us hanging for weeks again!!!
PRETTY PLEASE!!!
i promise not to it again rach!!!!
but if by chance i do...you have the right to cuss me out and kick my butt.

185 Re: Shattered on Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:20 am

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there will be NO kickin butt and cursin out because she NOT gonna leave us hanging lol



RIGHT? cyclops

186 Re: Shattered on Sun Nov 01, 2009 7:38 am

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Actually....there will be. My computer just crashed and idk when itll be fixed. Im on my phone now. ill still be able to bump others so ill be around.

187 Re: Shattered on Sun Nov 01, 2009 8:39 am

SexyT

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Oh no!!
What is up with these computers crashing!!!
Oh well...
Let us bow our heads and pray!!!


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My Happy Ever After NEW
Love Mist

Coming Soon
Last Call

Will be revived
Underneath the Make-Up
Dark Secret

Thanks for all the support ladies!!
Please read and leave feedback!!






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188 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:48 am

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loving it ! sorry o haven`t been
commenting &+ updating lately ,
but i definitely haven`t forgetten about
you ! i`m proud of marcus and indigo .
they make me smile . can`t wait for tha
next add , cause i am sensing some drama
about to errupt from something !

UPPZ !!

189 Re: Shattered on Tue Nov 10, 2009 12:32 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Waiting 4 another add

190 Re: Shattered on Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:34 am

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Cannot wait for next add


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191 Re: Shattered on Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:31 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Damn man
Its been almost a month
I hope u can add soon cuz i really love ur story!

192 Re: Shattered on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:59 pm

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Has it been that long, Peaches?
my bad.
im not at home this week but ill start brainstorming in my diary that way ill have something to write about?

193 Re: Shattered on Sun Nov 22, 2009 7:09 pm

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Yep...Lol...
Feel like years.
Can't wait for a new
add...


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194 Re: Shattered on Tue Nov 24, 2009 11:12 pm

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oh please add soon!!!!!

195 Re: Shattered on Fri Nov 27, 2009 9:11 pm

Pleasure's wifey*peaches*


Add
A very long add

Pretty please????

196 Re: Shattered on Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:29 pm

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~New Reader~

Damn I hope that dealin dont get him in trouble wit Indi. Anyway I luv the story keep it up.

HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ
HURRY UP & ADD PLZ

197 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 5:43 pm

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I'm writing sweethearts! Thanks so much for waiting so patiently. And excuse any mistakes i'm typing with the assistance of an on screen keyboard. Because my 'j', k, and l keys dont work

198 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:26 pm

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ok... PLEASE HURRY

199 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:56 pm

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Chapter Fifteen


Indigo Nicole


"Indigo!"
My father called. His voice echoed through the large house, annoyingly. I rushed over to his side on the white leather couch. I thought it was tacky but my stepmother insisted.


"Yes?"
I questioned.

"Indigo, your mother called today."



I raised my eyebrow, what did this have to do with me? He obviously read my face because he went straight to explaining. "Indigo, she wants you to stay with me permanently." He announced as if it was a big shock. I gave him an ‘oh well’ look and smile. He smiled in reply.


"Where’s China?"
He asked and I simply shrugged. It definitely was no concern of mine. As long as she wasn’t with Marcus I was too cool about her whereabouts. And I doubted that Marcus ever wanted to see her again after the way she’s been acting towards Riah lately….Which reminded me to call or at least text her tonight. I got up, and walked away. Even if it wasn’t the end of our father-daughter convo, I was done talking. And off to the showers even though it was only eight thirty.


```



Thunderstorm.


And daddy’s out with evil step mom. Lord knows I’m afraid of storms. I sent Marcus a text to come over and he did. I opened the door in my night gown and hurried him in the house before he got wet. "Thank goodness for ya’ll having a screened walk way." He commented and I smiled and gave him a hug and a kiss. He shut the door and sat on my couch. I shut the lights out before joining him.


We talked for the longest, and finally I was drifting to sleep gradually. "Indi, baby, you gone dream bout me?" He asked.


"I don’t know babe, I usually can’t control what I dream about. But for you I can try to make an exception ."


"Indigo, I know you ain’t getting smart with me."
He said, putting me on his lap.


"Santa, I’m too heavy for you to be putting me on your lap."
I said sleepily.

"If I’m Santa this must be Christmas. What do you want?"


"For my boyfriend to stop bugging me. Can’t he see I’m sleepy?!"
I growled.


"Well, let’s wake you up."


I was about to start my protest when I felt his hands on my hips, squeezing them. "Marcus?" I asked waking up a little. His full soft lips went to my neck, finding they’re way to my spot and then sucking. "Marcus, I can’t have a hickey." I whined.


"Find a spoon."
He answered like it was nothing. I didn’t want to sit with a cold spoon on my neck just because he decided to be Count Dracula or Edward Cullen for a night. I turned slightly so I fully faced him, I could have SWORN I felt his lips going lower. His hand traced the lace on the trim on the gown.


"Mar-Mar- Mar-cus," I stuttered. "What are you doing?" I asked him, with my voice trembling.


"Making you mine."


"Marcus……I’m not ready."
I said reluctantly, even though I was enjoying the rising heat in my body I knew I wasn’t ready. Well, I wasn’t ready to show anyone my body.


"For what? Who said anything about penetration? I just wanna make you fee as good as you been making me feel good. Lets go to your room, Bae."



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200 Re: Shattered on Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:58 pm

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I know it's short and boring but I gotta get in the swing of writing again. Hope ya'll enjoy!

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