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126 Re: Shattered on Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:28 pm

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It might be a minute. Going through something right now. ily guys though!




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127 Re: Shattered on Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:32 pm

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128 Re: Shattered on Tue Sep 08, 2009 3:37 pm

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129 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:56 pm

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130 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:54 pm

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*writing.

131 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:56 pm

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132 Re: Shattered on Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:27 am

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133 Re: Shattered on Fri Sep 11, 2009 10:07 pm

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Chapter Eleven


"What?!" My eyes popped open hearing my mothers words. I had just laid down on the couch, tired after a long day of school. My mother’s tall figure stood over me clapping.

"I’m pregnant, Indigo." She said, beaming and glowing. My mother couldn’t be pregnant.

"But you just started dating him three weeks ago. It can’t be his. Let’s hope you aren’t that easy!"


I shouted, knowing my words cut her like a knife. I knew I was wrong for saying that but I was upset today too. But I refused to show it. She was silent before she marched off towards her room, "Don’t you even think about coming back to live with me." She snarled.

"What?"
I questioned her attitude.

"After what you just said, don’t think about living with me. It’s probably for the best. Kenny and I need to be by ourselves anyway."

"That romanticized sense of love is what got you in this situation in the first place! Same thing with my daddy!"

I shouted, hoping she would see the error of her ways.

"What do you know about love? Nothing. What do you know about my past? Nothing. So Indigo Nicole Jones, I think it would be best if you hopped on in that car of yours and went on to Nicks."
My mother said, stepping inside of her room and slamming the door.

I pulled out my cell phone, "Babe are you busy? I need to chill."

When I called Marcus, he did not inform me I would be meeting the family. I straightened up after I saw his mother. She looked young and pretty, a very happy woman. She welcomed me with warm arms after she scrutinized my appearance and personality. I was just happy that I got the stamp of approval. Nique came down the stairs, with a small belly poking from her tight shirt. I seen her in the hallways, and when me and Marcus started talking we waved to each other but that was the extent of our communication.

"Aye, ya’ll gone see her again. Now, let’s go." Marcus interrupted and grabbed my hand leading me up the stairs.

"Marcus, keep that door open!"
His mother shouted. I giggled softly, "Indigo, sweetheart, I like you but you never know. I am not trying to have two grandkids." She cut her eyes at Nique as Marcus and I went up the steps to his room.

Like the rest of his house, the room was nice, neat, and modern. His mother had wonderful decorating skills. I sat on the large bed and he sat beside me. "What’s up, Querida?"

I shook my head and he gave me a look that said, "you lyin’." I laughed at his facial expression "I know when your sad, Indigo."

I looked up at him realizing how he knew and was silent. "But we’re past that right?" He asked me and held my hand. I nodded slowly.

"Baby, you can talk to me. I’m your man."

"It’s just….I said some really mean things to my mom and now I gotta go stay with my dad."

Marcus sighed and nodded. "Indi, that’s not the end of the world, Querida."

"It’s the end of mine."
I huffed. "I have to see China and her mom, who both hate me every day. China and her
mom are like the models of perfection. Beautiful faces, nice shapes, the guys want them….and then there is me."
I looked up at Marcus, not for him to make me feel better, but to see if he really got what I was saying. He pulled me unto his lap, sideways. "Who needs a Barbie, anyway?" I smiled at him. His left hand went from my shoulder to my thighs, "I like you, I like how your shaped. It just means when it gets to that time, I got more to kiss on, touch on, grab on…love on." I sighed.

"What ya’ll talking about kissing and rubbing for?!"
His mother shouted from down the stairs. Marcus looked
really embarrassed and I kissed his check and smiled.

"Thank you for making me smile, baby. I hope I can do the same for you."

"Every time I see you."
He said back. His phone vibrated and I was able to see who the sender was. Jazlynn. Now what the hell was she doing texting my man?! I was surely going to find out.


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From: Jazlynn
She’ll never be able to do you like I do you.
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I shook my head and focused back on Indigo. She was looking so pretty today, and looked right at home on my lap. It seemed like we had been dating for years instead of weeks.
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"Marcus, why you been avoiding me?!" Jazlynn questioned, she cornered me at Wal-Mart. I told my mama she should have went to the store herself. Now, I gotta deal with her.

"Jazlynn, she’s your friend."
I said, trying to talk some sense into this clueless girl.

"I know that."
She folded her arms over her chest, making her short skirt go up a little. "Marcus, I’m not asking
for a relationship!"
She shouted.

"Calm your voice." I warned her calmly. "What do you want from me, Jazlynn?" Her arms slowly became unfolded and she walked towards me, more like slid towards me. Her eyes were lowered and she bit her lip, yes she was sexy. So sexy. Too sexy.
"What do I want?" Her body was pressed against mine, her lips against my ear, "You. Right here. Right now."

"In Wal-Mart?"
I asked her.

"But I can’t wait any longer."
She pulled her face away from mine and I saw desire written all over it. Her hand grabbed mine and she started to lead my hand towards her spot. "Please, Marcus."

I looked away, and then back at her. Then behind her. China. Looking straight at me, while Jazlynn was all over me. I was about to push Jazlynn away when China did it. I saw a flash from her phone and I saw her smile. Then she turned away on her heels. "Damn, Jazlynn!" I yelled and then pushed her away.

A wave of hurt washed over her face, "….Marcus-" I walked off, leaving her there. I picked up my phone.

"Indigo?"

"Tell China she can put her phone up because I saw it already!"
Click.


I know that it's short and boring but I'm having writers block but I wanted to give ya'll something.

Lisa

134 Re: Shattered on Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:32 pm

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That add was hott...
Marcus Marcus Marcus...
Damn don't hurt the girl
when she is going through issues
although it isn't ur fault...


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135 Re: Shattered on Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:10 am

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hey
It was short BUT NOT BORING!!!
Luvd it!


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136 Re: Shattered on Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:11 pm

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well i loved it girl


damn i woulda kicked jazlynn ass then took china phone n broke it and i woulda started to head for marcus n he woulda cAlmede me down n told me wat haoppened n i woulda understood after 2 hours of making up lol




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137 Re: Shattered on Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:11 pm

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138 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:46 pm

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139 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:00 pm

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I have this add finished. I'll post as soon as I get home tomorrow. Which is like...four-ish

140 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:17 pm

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141 Re: Shattered on Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:55 pm

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upsz cnt wait

142 Re: Shattered on Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:42 pm

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Chapter Twelve.



I knew he would be coming to find me soon, I was on the next aisle over. I wiped the few tears from my eyes and heard Marcus’ voice. I didn’t even try to run. I just stayed in the spot I was in.

"Indigo, let me
-"

"I saw it all, Marcus. There’s no need for you to explain. Not you. Where is that bitch at though?"
I questioned and turned around. Jazlynn was supposed to be my friend, we grew up together. We had went through a lot together and here she was trying to make my man have sex with her. I knew she was scandalous but I never would have thought she would do something like this to me.

"I don’t know,"
He offered quietly as I picked up a can of some kind of air freshener.

"That’s cool cause I’ll find her!"
I was beyond mad and beyond hurt. She didn’t even think about me. I was about to start looking for her when Marcus grabbed my waist.

"Querida, let’s focus on us."

"I am focusing on us! Marcus, she is fuckin’ threat to us. I saw her come on to you, yes. But I also
saw you almost give in. You were about to give in. That’s what you want.."
I let tears flow from my eyes
as he pulled me into his chest.

"Indigo Nicole, I want you. I’ve told you
that."

"Let’s talk somewhere else. Take my car."


I put the can of air freshener back and we silently walked out of Wal-Mart. I was even crying silently. The ride was quiet too, we went to the same park we went to when we first just talked. It seemed like the words flowed here. We sat down at a bench and I just looked down.

"Indigo-"

"Do you think of me like you think of her?"
I asked him and kept my head low.

"I don’t understand."

"You want her."

"No, I want you."

"I saw the way you looked at her, Marcus! Like…Like, you would do her right there! Do you ever feel that way about me? Can you even see yourself with me like that?"

"Indigo…"

I got up from the bench and looked at him, the sun was just now setting. "Marcus. I’m starting to trust you, you need to tell me right now if I need to stop the process."

He shook his head, "No. Indigo, I’m telling you, I want you."

"You keep saying that. You keep saying that but not two months ago, I was an ugly dog to you!"
I
shouted at him. He looked at me and grabbed my hands.

"Indigo, calm down."

"I can not calm down, Marcus. I just feel like your playing me!"
Marcus stood up and pulled me into his chest. I tried to fight him for about five seconds but it was no use.

"Indigo, I never thought
you were ugly. I just went with what everyone else did. You’ve always been cute. Now, your beautiful."

"But Jazlynn’s sexy."
I insisted. I watched people turn their heads to us. But I couldn’t care less. It seemed like this was bringing out my insecurities. All of them.

"What would you rather be, Querida? Beautiful or sexy?"

I thought for a second. It was a hard question, I looked him dead in his eyes, "If it means you’ll want me like you want her…I would rather be sexy."






I didn’t know how to respond to her. I didn’t know what I was supposed to say to that. I justpulled her even closer to me. "Calm down, Indigo."

"Marcus…Do you really want me?"
I loosed my grip so she could step back a few steps.

"More than you know."

She turned her head away from me and I was still clueless as to what I was supposed to say or do to fix the
problem. Hell, I didn’t know what the problem was between us. "Indigo, baby, what do you need me to
do?"

Indigo bit down on her lip and then kissed me. She kissed me with everything she had and I returned the favor. This girl thought I didn’t want her but in actuality she was all I wanted right now. She pulled away from me and we were both quiet.

"I’m not mad at you, Marcus." Indigo broke the silence. I looked at her, rather studied her. I pushed some of thehair out of her face.


"Then why put me through this?"
I asked her honestly. She forced a smile on her face.

"So you know how I feel when stuff like this happens. So you know how it affects me."
I nodded and pulled her really close to me.

"I like you
a lot. I’m trying not to hurt you, I’m trying so hard to be good to you, Indigo."

Indigo looked at me, "I know. I can feel it." We sat in silence again and I grabbed her hand and just appreciated the connection we had going on.

"Marcus…your making it really hard for me not to fall for you."

"That’s my
job."

"Marcus….I’m falling really hard for you."
She admitted. I turned to look at her and her eyes were averted from me. Her hair blowing. I leaned back, took my finger and turned her head towards me.

"
Indigo, I’ve been fallen for you. At first, I thought I had just spontaneously had saw your beauty. But it was gradual. It started in sixth grade. When you first wore a dress…it was red." She nodded and smiled.

"Then why were you mean to me for so long? I seriously thought you hated me."

"I’m sorry I put you through that, Indigo."


We were quiet again and I thought about what I told her. It was true, very true. And I couldn’t give her an honest answer as to why I did it. But I had and I couldn’t take it back. I was deep in thought when I felt her soft lips on my neck. "You tryna get in trouble tonight?" I asked her coming back to reality.

"Not tonight. Let’s go, it’s getting late."

As she drove me back to Wal-Mart, I thought about our conversation. It was very possible I was falling in love with Indigo Nicole Jones.



And I did not mind one bit.

143 Re: Shattered on Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:15 pm

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That add was so awesome...
I love their relationship.
I love the way Indigo feels insecure
and Marcus have yet to prove his love
to her...

Wait a minute
The negro said he was
falling in love...
HELL YEA...
LOL add more please
for me and nibs


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144 Re: Shattered on Fri Sep 18, 2009 3:38 am

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golden07 wrote:
LOL add more please
for me and nibs

and for me and Simba!!!


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145 Re: Shattered on Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:25 am

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I LOVEEDD IT

add more when u get a chance

im sooo back to loving Marcus lol and indigo o wow she so gullable lol


jazlynn needs to just go and get jumped by some group of girls and get her face FUCKD UPPPP
and all those other hoes to lol

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thanks for that fire add LISAAAAA lol

146 Re: Shattered on Tue Sep 29, 2009 12:47 am

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uppity upz...


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147 Re: Shattered on Tue Sep 29, 2009 1:26 am

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Where u at Lis!!!
New add please!!


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148 Re: Shattered on Tue Sep 29, 2009 2:35 pm

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WHERE ARE YAAA

LIKE IM GIVING YOU MADDDD UPPPSZSSSSSSSSSSSSSSZZZZZZZ RIGHT NOW LOL



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149 Re: Shattered on Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:44 pm

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Awww[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]

Ya'll really miss Indigo and Marcus huh???

I'ma do my best to get ya'll an add before or on Friday. No promises though!

Love ya!

150 Re: Shattered on Thu Oct 01, 2009 2:43 pm

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