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51 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:46 pm

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YAY!


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52 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:46 pm

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Oh, and it's realllly good.


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53 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:53 pm

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LOL...Thanks


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54 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:35 pm

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thank u lol

55 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:03 pm

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is someone gonna add or what?????

56 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:48 pm

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Kayla

We sat at the bus stop waiting for the bus patiently as the sunset slowly began to set in the horizon. Thoughts flashed into my mind about earlier today as tears began to well in my eyes. I soon diverted my attention to my dear sister who is swinging her legs to and fro on the bench. When I glance up back towards the street, I notice someone staring at me in a newer model Jeep Grand Cherokee waiting at the stop light. I quickly shift my eyesight back towards Kaleigh who is now speaking to me.

“What is it Kay?” I asked her looking her in her eyes.
“I have to go to the bathroom.” she said.

I release a deep sigh. “Why are you just telling me this? I asked getting up to see if the bus is on its way yet.
“Because I didn‘t have to go when I was in the store.” she whined switching in her seat.

No buses in sight. We only had a few bags so I gathered them up in my hands and quickly grabbed Kaleigh’s hand guiding her back towards the store. Walking back in, I head towards the back where the restrooms are.

“Put tissue on the toilet, flush, wash your hands, and do not touch anything with your bare hands after they are clean.” I told her as she scooted into the bathroom. I stood by the door waiting for her when I noticed a figure walking towards me in my peripheral vision. Looking up it was him…the man from the club.

“Can I help you?” I asked with so much attitude.
“I didn‘t know there was a McDonald‘s in here.” he joked which I didn’t take that nicely.
“Who the hell you think you are stepping up to me like that?” I said showing my normal attitude.
“I‘m sorry…Look, I noticed you was waiting for the bus, I just wanted to offer you and your little girl a ride home before dark sets.” he said looking me dead in my eyes.
“That is my little sister first of all, and you came all the way in here just to offer me a ride. What‘s the deal? First you try to rescue me from my ex and now offer me a ride. What‘s the deal?” I asked not understanding the extra mile he was taking.
“Nothing. I was just asking since I had remembered you from the other night.” he said.
“Well, I shall decline the offer. No offense, but I don‘t know anything about you which means you are a stranger. Goodbye.” I said waving him off as the door open from the restroom.

Kay walked out looking at the male who still stood in my presence.

“Who is he?” she asked.
“I am Orlando…Just asking your sister if you two would like a ride rather than waiting for the bus.” he explained to her.

She held a smile on her face but look at me mostly. She tug on my clothing. “Can we? I hate waiting for the bus.” she said.

I looked at her wanting to please her, but then look at him. He is very handsome, but for some reason I do not trust him.


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57 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:24 am

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good add janae!!!!!

58 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:35 am

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59 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:36 am

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I likey Orlando....


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60 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:12 pm

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61 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:56 pm

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Whose next?


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62 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:57 pm

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Woo hoo...new page


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63 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:04 pm

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ur welcome janae....

i cant go next cause my head is BANGING SOMETHING SERIOUS Crying or Very sad

64 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:19 pm

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Hope you feel better Bree


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65 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:45 pm

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THANK YOU GIRLLLLLL

66 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 10:37 am

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67 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:16 pm

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I helped buckle Kai in and went around to get in myself. Yes i did accept the ride but only because i didnt like it when kai cried. Damn i have soo much love for her. When he got in the truck he was starting a conversation on his cell phone. I sigh lowly and took in my surroundings. He had a nice whip im not gone even lie. It was all black with the Black rims and Red interior. I looked over at him he was soo damn sexy low fresh haircut, he had waves for days and his smile was perfect. I would love to do some th..- hold on did he just say somthing

"What you say" i said diverting my attention to him
He smirked and repeated hisself, " Where do you live" " sorry, i live at the Village Allapattah Aprtments"


I looked at his facial espression, He made a look as if he was thinking hard about something. I sighed heavy as he turned the radio on. We road for about 15 Mins. We finaly pulled up i looked back and saw kai sleep. i smiled and got out the car so i could gather my bags. I saw Orlando in my side view getting out. He grabd Kai out the back and followd me as we reached my door. Wen we got in he put her on the bed and i walked him to the door to thank him.

" Thank you for the ride its very much appreciated." "you welcome ma anytime" i was lookin at the ground when i felt him lift my head up. " Dnt never look down keep ya head up You to beautiful for that" i looked him in his eyes and we shared a small laugh then he spoke again " but look im late for something but keep my number and call me sum time maybe you and ya sister can go out with me ..my treat" I thought about it for a minute. Now i wouldnt mind seein him again."I will think about" We said our good byes and he walked away and i stood there until i couldnt see him anymore....


Damn i think im Fallin for this guy



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68 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:18 pm

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ok so here is my story i never done a add on story please tell me if i did bad cuz i will surley delete that add if it dnt make since or something lol



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69 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 2:06 pm

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RaeMoney09 wrote:ok so here is my story i never done a add on story please tell me if i did bad cuz i will surley delete that add if it dnt make since or something lol



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I THINK IT WAS GOOD...JUST THE ONLY THING WAS THAT
HE HAS A FIANCE.....SO IF IT WAS A FLIRTLY ADD........
IDK IF THAT WOULDA BEEN A GOOD THING...BUT IF HE WASNT FLIRTING W/ HER
THEN IT WOULD BE EXCEPTABLE..GOOD JOB THOUGH

70 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:49 pm

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breanna_94 wrote:
RaeMoney09 wrote:ok so here is my story i never done a add on story please tell me if i did bad cuz i will surley delete that add if it dnt make since or something lol



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I THINK IT WAS GOOD...JUST THE ONLY THING WAS THAT
HE HAS A FIANCE.....SO IF IT WAS A FLIRTLY ADD........
IDK IF THAT WOULDA BEEN A GOOD THING...BUT IF HE WASNT FLIRTING W/ HER
THEN IT WOULD BE EXCEPTABLE..GOOD JOB THOUGH


i see it as if it WERE a flirty add it would be great that would make the story more interesting. it seems more real, you know how men are what does it matter if he has a fiance?. so i think you did good, if someone doesnt like that, they should add on to alter what happens this is a pro of add ons. Wink

71 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:50 pm

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p.s i think story is going pretty good.

72 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:50 pm

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new page?

73 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:50 pm

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...........................................howabout now?

74 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:50 pm

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bounce

75 Re: The Official Add On Story...Join in on Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:50 pm

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