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The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED)

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126 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Sat Aug 15, 2009 5:10 pm

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OMG Shocked WAT IN THE WORLD
Y RAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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127 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:42 pm

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128 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:28 pm

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a small but interestin (I HOPE) add coming now pig

129 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:33 pm

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130 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:41 pm

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I stared at her for an instant and then hugged her.

This was not what I expected - hell, the thought never crossed my mind.

I knew without a doubt, my parents had no clue. And when they found out, heart attacks won’t be ruled out of that day’s happenings.

I shook my head as I remembered how angry they were when they found out about my then seventeen-year-old, teenaged pregnancy.

“How did this happen, Raven?” I asked. As though it had been something that was done to her, and not something she had shared in.

“I did it,” she said, taking the full blame upon herself. She looked desolate, as she tossed the shining jet Black hair over her shoulders.

“Not all by your self,” I spoke, “unless things have changed a hell of a lot lately.”

“I did it, Kiery,” she repeated.

“Who’s the father, Raven?”

Father. …Not just
“who is the boy?”

It really brought home the idea that she was having a baby … a child. A living, breathing person.

Which led me to think.

What the hell was I thinking having sex without a condom at seventeen years old?

“It doesn’t matter,” she answered glumly, taking me back to reality.

“Hell yes it does,” I spoke. “Are you involved with someone at school?”

Without even knowing him, I wanted to kill him. But she shook her head in answer.

“Raven who is it?”

“I don’t want you to do anything about it if I tell you.”

I looked at her for a second and my eyes widened. “Were you raped?”

“No, I wasn’t” … “It’s my own fault. I did it willingly. I was so impressed with him … I thought … I don’t know,” she said, tears flooding her eyes again. “I guess I was flattered. He was so worldly and so different, and so grown-up.”

“How old is he?” I questioned.

“Nineteen.”

A nineteen-year-old with a seventeen-year-old girl.

Sure the age difference is nothing major, but he should have known better, at least, and have the decency to use protection.

“He took your virginity?” I asked.

She nodded and didn’t offer further details.

I knew she wasn’t promiscuous and initially wanted to wait until marriage. But she was also almost eighteen years old, and wasn’t stupid. He had obviously been someone who mattered to her.

“Are you angry?” she asked.

I shook my head, “no.”

“Are you disappointed?”

“Yes. Just as how I was disappointed with myself,” I answered. “How did you meet him?”

She sighed, “he was a model on one of the shoots I did,” she said miserably. “Then I saw him at Spectaculars party that mom brought us to. We exchanged numbers and started talking. He treated me like I was a woman of the world, and he was so handsome and caring.”

“Have you told him yet?”

She hesitated, then paused. “I don’t really want to anyway. But I called the agency and they said he was with another agency and went to Paris or some. He was just passing through, and they didn’t really know him. He wanted the pictures for his own portfolio before he went to London. Nobody knows how to find him.” She sighed, “it doesn’t matter anyway, I bet he never wants to see me again.”

“Why would you say that?” I asked. This dude was really walking a thin line.

“Because, Kiery. Guys like him, that’s what they do. They don’t want a relationship or anything long-term” … “I mean, he was cool, but his friends were ass holes. They offered me some drugs once, and when I said I didn’t want them, they called me a baby.”

And now she was having one.

“I didn’t tell him about it though.”

“What was his name?” I asked.

“His name was Aladiamond. But no one even knows his last name.”

Jesus Christ.

This was ridiculous.

“I assume you haven’t told mom or dad yet.”

“And I really don’t want to,” she said. Her voice soft.

I nodded.

I didn’t want to at her age either.

“So what are we going to do about this?” I asked with a sinking heart.

“Well, I’ve been thinking, I mean, I thought a lot about it and … maybe we don’t have to tell mom.”

I studied her expression, “what do you mean?”

“Can you take me to your doctor tomorrow?”

I looked at her as if she was bouncing around on top of the table -- as if she had lost it.

“No.”

“Why not?” her face was filled with terror. “I’m not going to keep it, Kiery. I barely even know who this guy is, and I can’t have this baby all by myself. That’s stupid and fucked up.”

“You’re not getting rid of it, Raven, not with an abortion anyway,” I said sternly.

“I can’t have a baby, Kiery! I don’t have time for a fucking baby, I’m seventeen!”

“Well you should’ve thought about that when you were laying on your fucking back!” I shouted. “What the hell were you doing all those times I talked to you about this Shit, dreaming? I told you, Raven, one time is all it takes. One time to get Aids, one time to get any other sexually transmitted diseases, and one time to get pregnant! And on top of that, I told you, use a fucking condom! I don’t want you to go through all the things I went through. I had to grow up and take on responsibilities long before I needed to. My whole lifestyle had to change, whether I liked it or not” … “Shit, Raven, I don’t talk out of my ass. Do you think I sit you down and educate you about these things for kicks?”

“I’m sorry, Kiery Im really sorry,” she said breaking down into tears.

I sighed.

I didn’t intend to be so harsh on her, but I really didn’t want her to have to take all the Shit I did.

Yeah, my life turned out fine and I love Mj more than anything. But if I could have seen what the future was going to be like, I would have done things differently.

Like, if I had known that Spectac was -

Again, I’m losing track of thought.

Sorry, I tend to do that a lot.

Like I said in the beginning, dealing with Spec can make a person’s mind begin to go -- maybe for the better, knowing what I know now …

Sorry, there I go again.

Let me just get back to the story.

“No, I’m sorry. I shouldn’t lash out at you like that.”

“I swear, Kiery. My periods are so irregular, I just thought that maybe it was from too much exercise or dieting, or exams, or worrying about getting into college … I don’t know. I never thought I could be pregnant,” she said honestly, tears spilling onto her cheeks and from there to the table.

“How far along are you? Do you know?”

She shook her head in answer and I sighed once more, “Okay, I’ll take you to my doctor tomorrow for a sonogram.”

She nodded and broke down even more.

I pulled her into a hug and stroked her hair gently. “It’s gonna be okay, baby. It’ll be over before you know it.”

She nodded against my chest as she sobbed and I thought about that Aladiamond guy, and how we were going to find him.

Little did I know, he was a lot closer than I thought.

131 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:44 pm

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i wanna add the next part to this because this ist the whole add but i dnt think yall just ready for all that so i might wait a couple days lol

132 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:44 pm

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lol!

133 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:44 pm

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134 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:45 pm

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new

135 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:45 pm

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136 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:46 pm

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anytime

137 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 8:46 pm

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NOWWWWWW


upszz we made it to page 10

138 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:09 pm

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Dang man...Leaving us hanging like that
how much closer is he?
and whats gonna happen?
Will she keep it?

Upz add soon


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139 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:38 pm

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i made him REALLY close lol


and as far as whats gonna happen well we will see tmrw maybe even in 5 mins depends if i just wanna post tonight lol

140 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:40 pm

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PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy
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141 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:44 pm

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this goes out to....janae and piggy lol JK but enjoy everyone

*******


I pulled into the drive-way of the huge, two story house my parent’s were letting me use until my condominium was finished, and killed the engine.

Raven had this distant look in her eyes and I reached over and took her hand. Rae, everything is going to be okay.”

“How are you so sure?” she questioned skeptically.

“Just trust me.”


I opened the front door that led to the large living room and turned to face her.

“Before we go inside, there’s something you should know,” I let out.

“What?”

“There’s someone else here.”

“Who?”

“That doesn’t matter. But whatever you do, tell no one about it,” I said sternly.

“Who’s staying here,Kie?” she asked.

“I said that doesn’t matter.”

“Okay, whatever, Kiery. I won’t tell anyone.”

We stepped inside and I locked the door behind us, giving the living room some light.

“I’m gonna go up to my room and see if I can find something to sleep in,” Raven voiced, heading towards the winding staircase.

“Yeah.”

I descended the little steps and walked further into the living room, stopping, and smiling at what I saw.

There was Spec, laying on the floor with Mj’s head on his chest -- the both of them sleeping.

This was definitely a Kodak moment.

Just then, Raven came bouncing down the stairs in an oversized White tee and some Grey sweats.

“I found these in the drawe- oh Snap,” she said, stopping as she saw what I was looking at before. “You hav spectacular blue smith in our house?” … “Yes!” she squealed.

“And your lips are sealed,” I reminded her.

“He looks even sexier when he’s asleep.” She completely ignored me.

“Did you hear me?”

“Yeah, yeah.”

She looked at me, “are you guys … you know …”

“What?” I asked, knowing damn well what she was asking.

“Kiery.”

“What?” I continued. “I don’t know what you’re asking me.”

“Yes, you do.”

“I assure you, I don’t.”

She sucked her teeth, “kei, stop playing.”

“Who’s playing?”

She huffed. “Whatever.”

“What do you want to know, Raven?”

“You know what I want to know.”

“No, I don’t.”

She cut her eyes at me, “I’m going to bed. Goodnight.”

“Night,” I smiled.

She ascended the stairs and I scooped Mj up. Waking up Spec also.

He ran a hand over his face and looked up at me, “hey.”

“Hey.”

I shifted Mj in my arms, resting his head on my left shoulder. “How long were you guys sleeping?”

“‘Bout five hours,” he replied checking his watch and letting out a yawn. He sat up, “damn.”

“I’ll put him to bed,” I said.

“Yeah. I’ll clean up,” he replied.


After putting Mj to bed and checking in on Raven, I descended the stairs and entered the kitchen.

Not even bothering to change clothes or go into my bedroom.

“Are you okay?” he asked as I sat at the island.

“Yeah.”

He looked at me, as if unsure, “are you sure?”

“Yeah,” I lied.

He walked over and stood behind me, leaning down. “Aite, well, I’ma take a shower. You wanna’ join me?”

I smiled a bit, “Tempting, but no. I’m more in the mood for a bath … a really long one.”

He chuckled and I turned to look at him.

“What?”

“I somehow knew you were going to say that, so I already arranged it.” He took my hand, “let’s go.”

He switched off the kitchen lights and led me upstairs. Through the master bedroom and towards the master bathroom.

He opened the door and I gasped as I saw what he had done.

There were lit candles everywhere, and the cherry vanilla scent pleased my nostrils.

I licked my lips, “Spec, you didn’t have to.”

“But I wanted to,” he whispered, reaching around me and unbuttoning my blazer, letting it fall to the floor.

“When did you find the time to do all this?” I asked, still in awe.

He picked me up and placed me atop the counter that was located by the sink, slipping my Black Christian Dior™️ boots off my feet. “Mj wanted to play by himself for a while, so I decided to do something constructive,” he smiled.

He peeled off the rest of my clothes along with his and we climbed into opposite ends of the bath tub, my feet in his hands.

“How was your day?” he asked as he continued to massage my feet.

I sighed, “okay, I guess.”

My mind went back to Raven and I decided to ask him about Aladiamiond. I knew it was a long shot but it was worth the try.

“Spec, do you know a guy by the name of Aladiamond? He was at your house warming party.”

“Yeah, I do. Why?” he asked.

“Do you know anything about him?”

“That depends,” he replied.

“On what?”

“Who wants to know, and what they wanna’ know. I mean, I can’t share all my brother’s business.”

I pulled my feet from his grasp and sat up, “Aladiamond is your brother?”

“Yeah,” he answered, looking at me. “What’s the problem?”

This, I definitely did NOT expect.

What the f**k?

How was this supposed to work?

“Kiery, what’s the problem?” he repeated.

I paused, “nothing.”

“You sure?” He took my feet into his hands once more.

“Yeah.”

I sank lower into the tub and rested my head against the back, closing my eyes.

How was I supposed to tell Spec that my sister was pregnant with a child his brother doesn’t even know he’s the father of?

How was I supposed to tell my parents - who aren’t too fond of Spec - that Raven was carrying his brother’s child?

Hell, how was I to tell them she was carrying a child?

I reached up and massaged my temple.


This might end badly.



[.] End of 10 [.]

142 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:45 pm

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143 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:48 pm

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i wanted to finish up that chapter tonight....

will add chap 11 maybe wednesday wen i think of sum to write bout lol

144 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Mon Aug 17, 2009 10:56 pm

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That add was awesome.
Dang man so much drama
what we gonna do.
Spec is so sweet...
I love their relationship..
Thanks for adding for
me and piggy to read tonight cheers


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145 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Tue Aug 18, 2009 8:03 am

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I'm speechless!! Too good...whats next??? Update Update Update!!!
lol!

146 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Tue Aug 18, 2009 2:32 pm

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ok i was sittin in class today n was just thinkin bout random things n the story came cross my mind so i thought up a fire add lol but ima add it lik thursday or tmrw


SO YALL CAN HAVE A BREAK FROM READIN SO MUCH

147 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Tue Aug 18, 2009 4:51 pm

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LOL....A break for what.
We know u need a break
so I won't pressure u Smile


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148 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:47 am

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Sad come back soon from that break!!! I wanna know what's gonna happen!!!!

149 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:49 am

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and....

150 Re: The Storm(2009) (COMPLETED) on Wed Aug 19, 2009 10:49 am

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