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76 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:18 pm

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workin on a new add....
bare with me yall...
promise it wont be that long!!
but for now...tryin for a new page i guess
lol

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77 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:19 pm

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cyclops
and i did it lmao


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78 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:39 pm

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Only because I'm HOOKED will I wait...


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79 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:34 pm

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lol
Thanks flower


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80 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:54 pm

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81 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:12 pm

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Angel

After putting on my clothes I went back into Justin’s room. He wasn’t there. I then made my way to the front. When I looked in the living room he wasn’t there. That’s when I heard noises coming from the kitchen area. I went in and he was fixing something to drink.

“You want some” he asked holding up the jug of juice. I shook my head no. I watched as he turned and put the juice back into the icebox. He was in a pair of basketball shorts. When he was finished he looked at me. I turned my head. I couldn’t look at him eye to eye.

“Can you take me home” I said still looking the other way.
“Yeah…Just give me a minute” I heard him say. I turned and seen him finishing his drink then heading up the stairs.

I went into the living room and looked around until Justin came back down. What really caught my eye was a picture of us back in New Orleans. I picked the frame up and studied the picture. I remembered that night. It was our second date. I Smiled.

“Ok…You ready” Justin said coming down the stairs. I place the frame back in its place and nodded.
“Yeah” I said walking towards the door.
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“hey momma” I said coming down the stairs. She looked back at me and smiled.
“You been sleep for a while…you feelin ok” She asked as I sat on the side of her.
“Yeah…I’m good” I said giving her a smile. She handed me the house phone “What” I said confused.
“Trey called twice” She said still looking at the T.V. I looked at her once she said his name.
“Oh really” I said looking down at the phone. I was debating on if I should call him back or not.
“Well…aren’t you going to call him back” My mom said now looking at me. I looked at her then back at the phone. “What’s going on” she said taking the phone out of my hand.

I looked down then back at her. It took me a minute to answer her. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to tell her what was really going on.

“Trey thinks that I’m still in love with Justin” I said looking up at my mom. She looked at me and shook her head.
“Are you” She asked. I shrugged my shoulders.
“I love Trey mom…I swear I do…but it’s like the feelings I use to have for Justin are coming back” I said still looking down. She nodded.

“Baby the only thing I can really tell you is to follow your heart.” She said taking my hand and putting the phone there. I looked up at her and she smiled. “Don’t worry” she said walking into the kitchen.

I watched as she walked off. Once she was gone I looked down at the house phone. I pushed talk and started to dial Trey’s number. The phone rang three times then someone picked up.


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82 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:13 pm

dezzy.baby1

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i know its not much...
but im having a little trouble on writing this part of the story!
just don't know how to put it
lol...


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83 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:24 pm

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It's okay....
I kinda feel for Angel.
That has to be tough
But oh well. CHOOSE JUSTIN!!!!


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84 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 11:27 pm

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I know...I feel for Angel too
Justin is off the chain
to shake it off like that without
holding a grudge. Whats gonna
go down next?

Upz


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85 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Fri Jul 31, 2009 10:33 pm

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86 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:03 pm

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silent


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87 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:10 pm

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new add coming soon!


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88 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:34 pm

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YAY!!!!!!!


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89 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 3:39 pm

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lol!


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90 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:51 pm

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91 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 6:51 pm

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“Hello” The voice on the other end of the phone answered.
“Hey Mrs. Wanda Is Trey home” I asked with a smile. Mrs. Wanda was like another mother to me she knew right away if I was sad or something without me showing any signs, just like my mother did with Trey.
“Oh no baby he isn’t here...He just left” she said.
“Oh” I said looking down at the floor.
“What’s going on with you two” She asked. Damn I really didn’t want to hear her ask that.
“What are you talking about” I said trying to pretend like I really didn’t know what was going.
“You know damn well what I’m talking about….Trey been actin lost and sick since yesterday…what the hell is going on” she said with a little more attitude. I laughed a little. No wonder why my mother and Mrs. Wanda are good friends. Those bitches act the same way lol. “Well” she said still waiting.

I told her everything. I told her about me and Justin’s past relationship, the day me and Chanel first meet up with Justin, How Trey didn’t like him from the start, everything. The only thing I didn’t tell her was me going over to Justin’s house earlier today. After I was finished with my story I heard a laugh.

“Wow” Mrs. Wanda said after she finished laughing. “Girl you know Trey…He is very jealous and hardheaded.” She continued. I smiled.
“Yeah” I said giggling a little.
“Well…don’t worry about trey… He doesn’t stay mad for long” she said. “And you.” She continued. “You have to follow your heart. I know you love Trey and I know he loves you. If you chose to be with Trey you need to let this Justin dude know that yall can’t be anything but friends. The same with Trey. If they really love you they will understand and only want for you to be happy.” She said. From the sounds of it she was smiling. I smiled too. She was right. I was just about to say something when Mrs. Wanda told me to hold on for a minute. I waited then heard when she got back on the phone.

“Trey just got home…I’ll tell him to call you right back…I don’t want him to know me and you been on the phone the whole time he’s been gone” She said in a whisper. I giggled.
“Ok Mrs. Wanda. Love you” I said with a smile
“Love you too baby” She said then we both hung up.

Right after I hung up the house phone I went into the kitchen and got something to drink. I sat at the bar and started to think about what my mom and mostly what Mrs. Wanda told me. I had to choose. I sat at the bar think far about a good 3 or 4 minutes when the house phone started to ring. I looked down at the caller id already knowing who it was.

“Hello” I said putting the phone to my ear.
“Wats up…You called” I heard his deep voice say from the other end of the phone. Lord did I miss his voice.
“Yeah…I was returning your call” I said looking down at my soda can.
“Oh” He said with no kind of emotion with it. I rolled my eyes.
“So…was their anything you wanted to…..”I started.
“I’m sorry” He said interrupting my sentence. “I…I didn’t have to go off like I did” He continued. I smiled.
“Trey...you don’t have to apologize. If I was you I would have probably acted the same way” I said getting up from the bar heading up to my bedroom. He laughed.
“Naw…You would have been a hundred times worse.” He said still laughing. I giggled at his comment. Once I was in my room I grabbed my cell and put it on vibrate. Not wanting the ringer to disturb me and Trey’s Conversation. Once it was on vibrate I laid next to me on my bed.

“Angel” Trey said after we both stopped laughing.
“Yeah” I answered.
“You know…I just want you to be happy” He said. His voice was so sincere and true.
“I know Trey” I said with a smile.
“I love you…You know that right” He said with a smile from the sounds of it.
“Yeah” I said feeling kind of guilty. “I love you too Trey” I said pulling myself together.
“You better” He said with laughter in his voice. I smiled. I really did love Trey.
We continued our conversation until I felt something vibrate on the side of me. It was a text. I looked at the screen and there his name was flashing on the screen. Justin. Damn Man.


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92 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sat Aug 01, 2009 10:07 pm

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Ummmmmm.

Angel we cool and all but don't be ignoring his phone calls like that.

If you don't want him I'll gladly take him.


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93 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Sun Aug 02, 2009 3:15 pm

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i say she should take justin and give me trey lol jk but i think she should be with justin...i just love them 2gether

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94 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Aug 03, 2009 12:46 pm

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lol!


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95 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:04 pm

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Ups!!!! Add soon!!!


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96 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:57 pm

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Dang I thought i commented
on this add
but answer the DAMN phone
Justin wants you.

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97 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:06 am

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Umm Angel is making me really really mad, she's so confused that it's crazy. I think she needs to make up her mind asap, like for real she's playing with three different people hearts right now. If she still have feelings for Justin than she needs to be with him and not lead Trey on, Trey really loves her and if she's not only into him than let him know. Aw Chanel I feel so bad for her, she's all in this mess and don't even know it yet. I don't think both her and Justin should've started when he was Angel's ex that was so not a good look. Angel needs to tell Chanel what's the deal asap before she Chanel finds out what's been going on between her and Justin.

98 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:03 pm

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Hey guys =). I promise you all will get a add sometime tommorow night after i get home from the saints game!

Thank you guys for all of your comments and bumping this up.
I so love yall. Very Happy


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99 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Thu Aug 13, 2009 8:04 pm

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Saints?!?!?!?!?! That's my team. Dezzy we can be bestest friends you take me with you. Very Happy


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100 Re: »Entice Me™ new add pg.7 on Mon Aug 17, 2009 12:47 pm

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We need an add please


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